Reviews for Reality
LuminiaAravis chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Very dark and angsty. Needless to say I enjoyed it.
Cable Addict chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
*Sob* I loved Charlie. He was a great character.

This story was really, I could totally see it happening.
Got Scots chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
Brotha! Hey, this was really good. I write Des fics too and I have SOO much trouble getting his character right. But you did it PERFECTLY! It was so much like Desmond, I got a little jealous. :)
purple-goose chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
This line:

Though he knew better than to think it possible, Desmond couldn’t help but feel that being here made Charlie somehow miraculously alive; and that as soon as he left, Charlie really would die.

really hit me. It's a very powerful and insightful. I hadn't considered Desmond and what he went through from the time from Charlie's death to when he reached the beach. Now that I read this, I do feel for Desmond and the pain of surviving.

I hear his voice in these words, feel what he's going through.

Good job.
LuvtoWrite chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
This was really good D Man, I watched this episode last night and I didn't like it. At all. haha, but anyways, I think you captured Desmond's emotion really well and I could totally picture everything that was happening. Great job!