Reviews for Time and Again |
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Not Naruto chapter 3 . 9/10 This isn't a naruto fanfic. It's a shitty time travel shinobi story with a naruto sticker slapped on it. No character is acting like they would. |
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Vishw chapter 3 . 8/8 What an asshole. Skipping the rest... |
nicole.elliott3884 chapter 1 . 8/5 I tried to stay, i really did but having a 30something leader act this oblivious and ignorant is just unnecessary and ridiculous. I can almost handle his lack of physical prowess but his mind should be sharp. Shame bc you're a great writer . |
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 7 . 5/26 For a veteran naruto to not know he upset Hinata by laughing at her telling him about her mother's death is asinine. I heavily disagree with the author note explaining he was too excited to be back in time to remember the conversation at all or notice she's upset with him |
UltimateNinja111 chapter 9 . 4/3 I hope the next chapters are more Naruto centric. |
UltimateNinja111 chapter 8 . 4/3 nice chapter! |
insanecoop chapter 6 . 2/11 I get it, trying to somehow no lt have a SSS rank Naruto run around in the past and kick ass as its very difficult to make a real story out of it but the reasoning for this nurfing, play out everything like it did before, still act like a idiot, be extremely cruel to Hinta even tho hes a 35 year old man and not an obnoxious 13 year old. All in all the story is lacking and I'm not invested enough to not drop it, so I wouldn't recommend this to others. |
jixuel chapter 5 . 1/21 how ridiculous, i was expecting a mature naruto. Traumatized, but mature. This one's a fucking punk, how frustrating |
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Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2023 Why the heck is he suddenly slower than Sakura if he only slowed down his walking speed?! |
Comic Manga chapter 5 . 10/1/2023 useless |
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Shadow's soul chapter 3 . 9/7/2023 I kind of hate how oblivious he is to what he did wrong. I can see him doing what he did, but to not realize how insensitive it would come off is really stretching it. Naruto is capable of being self conscious, and it doesn't take a genius to figure out he did something wrong. The fact that he doesn't realize what he did wrong in later chapters even though it was basically pointed out to him non-verbally that he in fact did do something wrong. And as sensitive and caring Hinata is, I doubt she could just let it go after a while when it's never resolved. I mean to her he basically just laughed at her mom's death. That's messed up. and while as readers we know the truth, I don't think I could ever be comfortable with someone again unless there was some explanation why the hell they reacted the way they did. |
aswinguruswamy1 chapter 6 . 7/21/2023 a grown war Veteran ninja will take hardly a week to get his arse back in sync with instinct. the behaviour of a mature person doesn't work like this. it's so infuriating to read. but I guess it has its perks. |