Reviews for Time and Again
dastewie2012 chapter 6 . 11/10
I’m trying to read it. And it feels like canon naruto, but it’s soooo painful to watch
Philodice chapter 22 . 11/9
no I was not surprised it was obvious that he got knocked out instead of activating the sharingan during that fight
Philodice chapter 15 . 11/6
Sasuke is always a jerk
Philodice chapter 14 . 11/6
Hinata is too sweet.
Guest chapter 35 . 9/6
You left hakke out of your jutsu translation list.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/25
Ha, whoooops.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/24
Corrections offered without malice.
“aren’t you’re students” your
“Gaara worldview” Gaara’s
“usua” usual
“Come one” on
“you applications” your
“she would come to” too
“crutch of the matter” crux
“Nine bijou” bijuu
Guest chapter 20 . 8/24
“you’re boss” boss
“to rigidly”too
“per say” per se
Guest chapter 19 . 8/24
“Blonds refusal” blond’s
“Kamui way out” Kamui’s
“fainted toward” feinted
“strange scrapping sound” scraping
Guest chapter 18 . 8/24
“where you?” were
“because of the brake” break
“so hoard of enemies” horde
“lightening ” lightning (4?)
“Torando” Tornado
Guest chapter 17 . 8/24
Corrections offered without malice.
“some god has sent” had
“less hospitable to insect larva” larvae
“chagrinned” chagrined
“whose going to protect” who’s
“not apart of” a part of
Guest chapter 16 . 8/24
“Pretend your with me” you’re
The Hiashi-clones were funny.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/24
Corrections without malice.
“Another thing coming” think
It’s “If you think X, you have another think coming” —that is, you’ll have to think again.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/24
“you’re secret” your
“bale him out” bail
“Naruto’s hast” haste
“comradery” camaraderie (blame France)
Guest chapter 13 . 8/24
“Free reign” should be free rein, it is a horse-riding idiom.
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