Why the heck is he suddenly slower than Sakura if he only slowed down his walking speed?!

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I kind of hate how oblivious he is to what he did wrong. I can see him doing what he did, but to not realize how insensitive it would come off is really stretching it. Naruto is capable of being self conscious, and it doesn't take a genius to figure out he did something wrong. The fact that he doesn't realize what he did wrong in later chapters even though it was basically pointed out to him non-verbally that he in fact did do something wrong. And as sensitive and caring Hinata is, I doubt she could just let it go after a while when it's never resolved. I mean to her he basically just laughed at her mom's death. That's messed up. and while as readers we know the truth, I don't think I could ever be comfortable with someone again unless there was some explanation why the hell they reacted the way they did.

a grown war Veteran ninja will take hardly a week to get his arse back in sync with instinct. the behaviour of a mature person doesn't work like this. it's so infuriating to read. but I guess it has its perks.

uggh.. I understand that the author has really tried to make it as convincing as possible but it's just too childish. A grown war Veteran

I'm not at all surprised. This is, after all, a torture fic.

This is a irritating story. Are you dumb or something? He came from the future. Yet you show him as the same as before. And what's the logic behind not able to withstand old body. I thought there was something interesting here, but it just a waste of time.

I’m trying to read it. And it feels like canon naruto, but it’s soooo painful to watch

no I was not surprised it was obvious that he got knocked out instead of activating the sharingan during that fight

Sasuke is always a jerk

Hinata is too sweet.

You left hakke out of your jutsu translation list.

Ha, whoooops.

Corrections offered without malice.
“aren’t you’re students” your
“Gaara worldview” Gaara’s
“usua” usual
“Come one” on
“you applications” your
“she would come to” too
“crutch of the matter” crux
“Nine bijou” bijuu