|Reviews for Time and Again|
| Great chapter 43 . 3/5
Wow, I really liked the story, although I would prefer that the bridge in wave was named after naruto. Oh well, at least Sasuke is not a traitor and en route to dieing. II hope he gets out alive. Looking forward to more!
| brutusjr chapter 20 . 2/26
I'm not a big fan of the "clueless" Naruto. I always thought they went overboard with that to the point of distraction. You are keeping true to the character though.
| brutusjr chapter 14 . 2/26
I like the way you are starting to write this a lot better now. I was worried you were going to keep Naruto in a hopeless rut for too long.
Thanks for sharing.
| brutusjr chapter 4 . 2/26
Getting a little tired of the continual tripping and falling, but other than that I am liking this story so far. Why do all of these time travel tales assume that Naruto cannot use any of his learned abilities right away though? I understand not pulling our a rasengen (sp?) immediately, but lower level stuff should be O.K.
| Jesus M. Christ chapter 1 . 2/17
This story is SO FUCKING boring. Really? "Oh I don't wanna change the future lemme just redo everything in canon woohoo". First of all, the future isn't just one string- it's like a carpet, with infinite parallel "universes" all squashed really close together. The only difference between each one is a singular choice. If one day you decided to be a good writer, and have a good premise, then MAYBE I wouldn't have wasted my time. But that's an alternate reality, a dimension that I sadly have no part in.
But then again, this story is washed up and old. I think I should just go before I get even more worked up from future chapters. Keep writing and hopefully you'll get better.
| onlytoask chapter 11 . 2/17
Good chapter. Pretty good fight scene.
| onlytoask chapter 9 . 2/16
Decent chapter. Writing's still great, but the plot is slow. I hope things start speeding up soon and that Naruto shows that he's a kage level ninja instead of just saying it.
| onlytoask chapter 8 . 2/15
Alright chapter, having the outcome first made the rest really boring though. Kind of a stretch with the way they beat Zabuza. He may have underestimated them, but he was far superior to them and he probably wouldn't have been tricked or beaten so easily. As for the Naruto being an idiot thing, you have to see other people's view on it. It's understandable that he wouldn't want to change things that worked, but that doesn't mean he should be doing nothing. And that's basically what he's doing. He's been given time and he's not using it. He wasn't watching for Tazuna, he wasn't monitoring missions, he wasn't being proactive with any of the future issues that were coming, he wasn't trying to do anything except make friends with his team. That's important to be doing, but it shouldn't have been all that he was doing. So really, he was being kind of an idiot.
| onlytoask chapter 5 . 2/13
It's still doing pretty good. The whole being unused to being in a short body is kind of bullshit though. After two decades of being one of the most powerful ninja alive and having to fight in unusual situations, I'm pretty sure he would've gotten to the point where being shorter and lighter wouldn't through him off that badly for that long.
| onlytoask chapter 3 . 2/13
This is pretty good. The only thing left that tends to ruin timetravel fics that could happen in yours depends on how you do power transfers from the future into the past.
| onlytoask chapter 1 . 2/12
It seems pretty good. But it'll really be the next few chapters that decide it.
| Guest chapter 31 . 2/11
You should come back and correct Rin's surname, considering it's Nohara and not Shin. Although I'd have to also point out that she's meant to be dead, but it's probably integral to the plot so that complaint is a moot point. Might wanna' tag this as AU at some point as well because of that.
| MilleCrepe069 chapter 2 . 2/11
Just wanted to say that this chap was awesome :). Not the usual 'oh Im back in the past thing', it made it more like what Naruto should feel. great job there! :D
| Guest chapter 37 . 2/10
Wow..this is going in my top 10 fanfic
| SaucyHandles chapter 22 . 2/10
Why did you decide to remove the part with kabutos cards?