Reviews for Time and Again
Guest chapter 35 . 9/6/2022
You left hakke out of your jutsu translation list.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/25/2022
Ha, whoooops.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/24/2022
Corrections offered without malice.
“aren’t you’re students” your
“Gaara worldview” Gaara’s
“usua” usual
“Come one” on
“you applications” your
“she would come to” too
“crutch of the matter” crux
“Nine bijou” bijuu
Guest chapter 20 . 8/24/2022
“you’re boss” boss
“to rigidly”too
“per say” per se
Guest chapter 19 . 8/24/2022
“Blonds refusal” blond’s
“Kamui way out” Kamui’s
“fainted toward” feinted
“strange scrapping sound” scraping
Guest chapter 18 . 8/24/2022
“where you?” were
“because of the brake” break
“so hoard of enemies” horde
“lightening ” lightning (4?)
“Torando” Tornado
Guest chapter 17 . 8/24/2022
Corrections offered without malice.
“some god has sent” had
“less hospitable to insect larva” larvae
“chagrinned” chagrined
“whose going to protect” who’s
“not apart of” a part of
Guest chapter 16 . 8/24/2022
“Pretend your with me” you’re
The Hiashi-clones were funny.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/24/2022
Corrections without malice.
“Another thing coming” think
It’s “If you think X, you have another think coming” —that is, you’ll have to think again.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/24/2022
“you’re secret” your
“bale him out” bail
“Naruto’s hast” haste
“comradery” camaraderie (blame France)
Guest chapter 13 . 8/24/2022
“Free reign” should be free rein, it is a horse-riding idiom.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/24/2022
Enjoying this readthrough. Typo jumped out at me:
“peaking at Zabuza” peeking
If you don’t know Japanese, why not use English jutsu names?
“Puchi” is loanword prefix from French, petit, whence English petite, so it’d be “puchibakuha”, not two words. Shoubakuha would be more local. Puchiekusupurojyon would be using more loanwordy bits.
Weight on chain would be a flail, not a mace.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2022
Guys, this ends in a cliffhanger and the sequel is abandoned. Don’t make the same mistake I did and get fooled by the complete mark
Guest chapter 12 . 8/5/2022
Depressing
venventus619 chapter 5 . 6/21/2022
you made naruto made 2 passive
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