Reviews for Off White
thisnewromantic chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Oh my goodness.

Oh my gosh-goodness.

Beautiful. The simplicity of your words and the complexity of the feelings is so clearly presented, it's breathtaking. You made my eyes water. Lovely.

Completely lovely.

In the beginning, I was rather confused, maybe because I haven't played the first KH, only the second, (I'm such a cheater), but then it was cleared up rather well.

Don't you dare stop writing.
Esperer chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Wow. You portrayed Namine so wonderfully, and that last part with Riku was so amazingly-detailed and so sad. Amazing.
coalmine chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Oh this should have so many more reviews. ._. This is absolutely gorgeous.

Characters were spot on, almost ridiculously so. Absolutely perfect. I specifically fell in love with your Larxene, I think you've just added a new facet onto the way I play her. x)

Great job!
MidoriChii chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Aw, that was sad.. and cute at the same time. Good job!
justgonenow chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
this is so sad...It gives the feeling of emptiness and depression at the end - which is what an angsty fic is supposed to do! so you've done your job perfectly! everyone was in character and it was all wonderfully put together.

job well done!