|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Defiance of the Hero|
| Basker chapter 19 . 21h
I loved when Harry was like SURPRISE MOTHERFUCKER and shocked Voldemort with his presence in France.
Is Harry... God? The creator? The Potter that molds the world into greatness and beauty and tragedy?
| Mr Bob chapter 17 . 10/15/2016
I love the story line and this is not a flame merely a few criticisms;
No offense but u can't just take away Harry's eye and then give it an ugly color that's messed up it was his best feature. Also I think there is a lot of unnecessary info. I also think the story is starting to drag cause it's taking to long fore things to happen. There are loads of attacks which aren't necessarily bad but I feel for such a powerful man that Harry is getting injured too often
Sorry but I luv ur story ideas so pls keep writing ️
| jj21991 chapter 30 . 8/31/2016
I have never left a review for any story I have read...
But I had to for this, you have an amazing talent to take the reader away into the fantasy world that you create. I admit I have read hundreds of Harry Potter fanfiction and yours are well and truly up there with the best of them. Thank you so much for the time and effort you have obviously put into your writing and I really hope it takes you far and that some agency somewhere finds the creative gem that you are lol. Your efforts are very much appreciated!
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/5/2016
"You gotta love that furry little guy!" "Shut up, Sirius."
| Not telling you chapter 3 . 8/5/2016
| Jaylin Shirley chapter 2 . 8/5/2016
| Remi Seddigh chapter 30 . 6/17/2016
You know what? I...I'm...I'm just done. This fic was so MINDBLOWINGLY AMAZING that I don't think I'll read many better fics. Really. Your writing is awesome!
| rnthenu chapter 30 . 4/8/2016
Surprisingly good finish. 29th Chapter's beginning part was the best in the story so far for me. Managed to touch me. Thanks again for writing.
| rnthenu chapter 20 . 4/7/2016
Harry kinds of reminds me Rand al'Thor. Light, dark, getting mad, voice talking in him, swordsman, leader, saviour. Thanks for writing.
| rnthenu chapter 16 . 4/7/2016
The Nundu fight was very disappointing. I mean might be a good brawl but really was that necessary? I really don't get why in all the fanfiction no one seem to be using AK against the dangerous wild beasts? Why do you have to use various other spells when one AK can finish the job (given that creature isn't in the league of Flash)? Forget why didn't he turn to human after getting to ground level and use the blue disintegrating stuff? I mean that's what he did after getting beaten by Nundus right?
| rnthenu chapter 13 . 4/6/2016
BTW was this written before HBP because this Griffindor's sword doesn't seem to have absorbed basilisk venom from second year
| rnthenu chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
Quite a good end. But I was bothered by the fact Voldemort was apparating around Diagon Alley and James didn't bother to apparate himself near Harry and side-along apparate Harry. And by the fact emergency portkey per person wasn't available. I mean it's "emergency" isn't it? The best strategy I think is to have one voice activated portkey per person which is always in contact with the person (e.g. a ring as in method of rationality).
| Code-Avalon chapter 30 . 3/1/2016
If there is one word to describe this story, it would be MINDBLOWING!
Seriously, I am confused and excited at the same time. Honestly, it's really confusing! All the time paradoxes and destiny stuff leaved my brain like mush! But on the other hand, it's really EPIC!
What are your hands made of? You write like you're crazy! Not that I'm demeaning you, it's good 'crazy'.
| thechumpiest chapter 30 . 1/7/2016
I see quite a bit of negativity in other reviews and agree that there were some problems with your story. But i am having a lot of fun reading your trilogy.
some notes: your devil/allarius reminded me quite a bit of Flagg in Stephen Kings Dark Tower series. i enjoyed your representation of "true" evil. I would imagine evil as being eloquent, intelligent and persuasive, just as he is in your story.
You are really starting to kill me with the drawn out never ending hardships. Man, no memory of his 117 odd years when he lands, you just cant make it easy can you.
I grudgingly see its necessity though. With such an overpowered protagonist, this story could easily degrade to shit like you find in a lot of fanfics. The challenges keep it interesting and worth reading.
Looking forward to reading the final 3rd of the trilogy. keep writing man, you have a talent for it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Ugh I hate all this universe jumping. Why couldnt he jusy go back to the other world? Ugh.