Reviews for Satisfactory
GlitterFrog chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Yaaaaaaaaay! *applauds* That was a masterpiece!
JamesLuver chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I absolutely adore this. 3 Brilliantly written, beautiful plot...there's nothing I don't like about it! D
Lovelihead chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
:D This is one of the fluffiest, cutest, best one-shots i have ever read! Well done! Sweenett Fluff ftw!
Loveless-Forever-in-the-dark chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Lady Nuit chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
aw he smiled love it girl truly do! poor mrs. lovett though i gotta tell you in the movie she mutters about killing mr. lovett with poison in a pie. she never loved Mr. lovett he was older than her by alot . just so you know
Rae Nightling chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
ah! it is so good i absoultly love it. not many people are good at writing such a good love plot between two very difrent and twisted people. i think you capatured mrs. lovetts emmotions wonderfuly . (ps. i cant spell so sorry about that in my reveiw.)
Johnnydspiratequeen chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Love it love it love it! the only mistake I can find is where you wrote "Mr." instead of "Mrs." but other than that, I love the fluff!
xlawa chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
jhwkejrhwe Why haven't I reviewed this?

I remember reading it a while back, too.

It was just as lovely the second time around, truly.

God. I love your writing.

-off to read some more-

KittyScarlet chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
hm cute and funny, i liked it :)
VampireSwan chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
I almost cried. How sad is that?

And it was so perfect and funny and heartbreaking and fluffy and awesome and just...perfect.


Adding it to my favourites, because I am definitely going to want to read it a second time.
Animelover231 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
I really enjoyed this, and the story before it! Thanks so much for sharing it. Will you write more Sweenett, please? There really isn't too much out there :) Definite fave and watch!
anbumoo chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
FLUF! and the snowballs.. BUT FLUFF! XD

This is wonderfully written and ridiculously sweet... I loved it! I think it's a great portrayal of "what could have been" in the Toddvett relationshop.. good work! XD
Tricki chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Another wonderful story! I loved every second of that - especially when she was tossing snow at him.

You said you wanted to know about errors? There was a word added somewhere... I think it was 'an' but I can't remember where it is... Only telling you because I'm pedantic about that sort of thing ;)

I'm a fast fan! Can't wait to read more.

~Tricki x
smashing chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Oh, I loved it! Completely adorable and written beautifully. And don't worry about it being unrealistic; I think it was very restrained and true to character. (And let's face it- if all fics were brutally, 100% canon, there wouldn't BE any Sweenett, and what's the point in fanfiction then? Us shippers need to dream, sometimes! )

I confess I don't remember that much about the previous version of this, except that I loved that too. There was one line though, where Sweeney says something along the lines of "I may be wont to pretend too, on occasion." Something like that. Anyway, I missed that line. But besides that I don't think anything was lacking :)
Tsuchikororin chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
I liked the part when she was throwing snowballs at him. Cute.
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