Reviews for The Human Factor
mamageek chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
i"I know," he pressed his cheek to the back of her head, looking out on the water again. "But if we let them have control of every single aspect of our lives then all we have is work and danger and uncertainty. And they might not be aware of this, but human beings can't survive like that." He let out a frustrated sigh, leaning his forehead against her. "Look, I am not trying to seduce you here, or talk you into anything - I doubt if I am even saying something that you don't already know."/i

This section is the ultimate perfection in a completely perfect story. I can't even express how much I love this.
Rokimbo chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Excellent fic. Wonderfully done.
Serotonin.Sky chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Wow. That was incredibly well written. There really is very little I can say at this point. That was just freakin' awesome. *goes off to track down more of your writing*
Charmed225 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Wow, nicely written! Well done :)
SGALily chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Love the elements of back story - beautifully interwoven with the plot. Characterisations are very nearly spot on. I can so see this happening! I notice it's a chapter 1 - please do continue!