Reviews for Renovation
alterguild chapter 20 . 4/25/2008
My first time reviewing this story, and I apologize for taking so long. Obviously, I don't have to tell you that this is an exceptional work, I should hope that you know it already. I love how you're developing the characters and keeping them true to life at the same time. The pace is also very nice, slow and steady and not rushed at all, giving plenty of time for things to develop naturally.

Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading the rest of this and hope that there are many more yet to come! _
YumeTakato chapter 20 . 4/25/2008
I enjoyed the chapter a lot. X3 See you next time!
Raven of Alaska chapter 20 . 4/25/2008
If things go right, then there could be two very happy Titans in the Tower. If things go wrong, then I'm predicting broken hearts and a team divided. Just my thoughts, though.


Raven of Alaska
Agent of the Divine One chapter 20 . 4/25/2008
Whoa! Deep chapter! And even though it wasn't said Garfield would never let any harm come to her. He would die before that happened.

But it should be possible to avoid that on their next date. :D
phantomreader chapter 14 . 4/25/2008
I'm really liking this story so far. can't wait to see how the rest goes. the ending was great too. I couldn't stop laughing for at least a minute. very entertaining.
MassChaosTheory chapter 19 . 4/24/2008
way to keep it going!
Agent of the Divine One chapter 19 . 4/24/2008
Hopefully the next date does not involve the purple zit. XD

Nice work. :D
roadspavedwithgold chapter 19 . 4/24/2008
one word.

Gun toten Girly chapter 19 . 4/22/2008
Only 3 or 4 more chapters?

That sucks! This was such an awesome story! Lovin' the fluff, it was very productive, the embaressment on going on your first date was magnificent, and the action was superb!

I loved it!

Gar can be so clueless at some points it's rather comical. I laughed at the part where you said:

"Sarcasm licked the words thickly but Garfield's expression turned into that of horror."

That was funny. ;D

Well, I hope you really update soon, just hearing you say there's not that many chapters left makes me want to read it more!

-Gun toten Girly
Shehrazad chapter 19 . 4/22/2008
i love this chapter so much. I think you did the fluffy scenes very well. Please update!
Liani Risate chapter 19 . 4/22/2008
This was a good chapter-the date was really good. Update soon please!
twiinklestar chapter 19 . 4/22/2008
The end is near? Oh.. well that sucks. I love this story. I like how you made Raven less ... unsociable and hidden but it was a tiny bit OOC (out of character -if you don't know). But very good. So there's another date is there ;)? Well, I can't wait!
XX.xXx.AchillezWiplash.xXx.XX chapter 19 . 4/22/2008
I love this story more and more with each chapter :)
YumeTakato chapter 19 . 4/22/2008
-laughs- Great chapter- I loved it. See you next time!
Kat786351 chapter 18 . 4/20/2008
Even better than the last chapter!
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