|Reviews for Desperate Rivals|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
I liked this but I didn't really like how Light lost his memories at the end and still loved L. Like, the reason he was so happy when L said I love you ws that L knew about all of his crimes, and still loved him
| masamumu chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Best Deatn Note story ever! You follow anime and I like real Light ,not OOC!
Well done,thank you !
| fudgeCola chapter 31 . 7/28/2016
oh my gosh XD i swear, suzette was literally my favorite character XD i love her bluntness and her cussing because it just makes her so much more real and dynamic, and that last line made me laugh so hard my mom got mad at me because she's working XD whoops
anyways, great writing author-san! keep it up :P
| neverXmind chapter 4 . 6/14/2016
light could have simply killed L, agreed to the new Kira's terms, find a way so the two could meet. and made misa go instead of him. Misa would meet up with the new Kira, read his name, and give the information to light through a camera and mic that was hidden on her person. Light would have killed off the new Kira, and that would be it. there, simple. You made light seem so stupid in this fanfic.
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/4/2016
I dislike your Light tbh, he seems to have lost his intelligence.
| Natsuki D chapter 31 . 4/17/2016
Absolutely loved the story (Best. !)
Thanks for taking the time to write it for us _
| vontiamyj chapter 2 . 4/12/2016
"All you do is lie" She hoed the him bad.
| fish thefts chapter 31 . 4/7/2016
You are the best author ever! .o. I've stayed up til 2 AM for the past week just to read all your stories! You are so magnificent
| Guest chapter 31 . 3/20/2016
| Naeya chapter 31 . 3/6/2016
I really liked this fanfic !
That was relatively easy for me to understand - I'm french, and my english is something between not very well and fucking bad - I began it in french, but the translation wasn't finished yet after three bloody years, so I came here ! And that was the first english fic I ever finished :D (and my first Death Note fanfic too)
I really don't know what I'm supposed to say, so, thank you for this awesome fanfiction !
| DataLatitude chapter 5 . 1/3/2016
I love this. Your writing is phenomenal. I love the L/Light relationship/friendship in all your fics. L always seems to be the more childish one, but he's definitely a topper! LLight
| Guest chapter 29 . 12/9/2015
This is so fluffy and sweet... The WHOLE story!
| furubafeind95 chapter 31 . 11/23/2015
I remember when I first stated reading this story and it's been an awesome journey! This is a great read and I'll definitely be checking out any future fics of yours.
| IceyKiwi chapter 31 . 8/19/2015
NOOOOOO IT'S DONEEE! I LOVED THIS! PLEASE WRITE ABOUT THE WEDDING AND LIGHT MEETING MELLO AND NEAR
| funezcookie6 chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
I had just read the first chapter of this story and I love this.