Reviews for Desperate Rivals
Doubled-Helix chapter 31 . 2/1
Okay, okay, okay, I don't know if you've already mentioned this, and I'm just being slow, but I just noticed that Reficul's name is Lucifer backwards, and I think that is really, really clever. And this ending was sweet. I had my doubts for a moment on receiving a sweet ending, but this has over exceeded all my expectations. Suzette is amazing. We have come full circle. I am so happy. Thank you for writing this. :D
livintoinspire chapter 31 . 1/27
First Death Note fanfiction! LOVED IT! I loved the ending and the over-enthusiastic Matsuda and just- gah everything! Thank you SO SO much for sticking with this story! I couldn't have asked for a better introduction to Death Notw fanfiction! :D
Guest chapter 17 . 1/21
I like how Arik's shinigami's name is Reficul - Lucifer backwards...
Beist chapter 31 . 1/13
I love your writing and hope you never stop. I completely destroyed my circadian rhythms to finish reading, and it was definitely worth every minute! :3
Guest chapter 14 . 1/4
Incredibly good kiss scene... Congrats
Little SAINT-ANGEL chapter 31 . 1/4
Hi there!
Oh my god, i just couldn't wait for the franch translation, so i decieded to read it here directly!-w-
Ahhhw, Light reaaally scared me with his speech to Misa... uuh fortunately it was an acting
So Suzette is working in the Wammy's house?
And... you did it!xD oh my god! "We're going to a wedding!" you just killed me!xD So L and Light will be a little family now and they will have many children and live happy forever!:3
aww; so a beautiful story!TwT no seriously, You're like my favorite Death note writer!:D
Thank you for this story!
Guest chapter 31 . 1/4
Holy shit your story is Amazing
I love it so f*ing much
Guest chapter 29 . 1/4
What a great fic, an awesome reversal of roles you created here, where L convinces him that he is not Kira and not the same old...
O man, you're genius...
Guest chapter 15 . 12/23/2014
NOOOO I love arrogant Light! NOOOOOOOOOOOO
Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2014
Well... Shit
Guest chapter 12 . 12/23/2014
NOOOO WATARI NOOOOOOOOO
Guest chapter 11 . 12/23/2014
Aww
Guest chapter 6 . 12/23/2014
Oh my god
SailorVictoryX L chapter 4 . 12/20/2014
I HATE AUTOCORRECT! "Leaning on" was supposed to be "leaned over"
SailorVictoryX L chapter 3 . 12/20/2014
Also in my bus review, "comes up" was originally "leaning on." Don't even ask me how that happened. Maybe I shouldn't have been reviewing at three in the morning.
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