|Reviews for Speak no Evil|
| g-peachy-chan chapter 9 . 8/27/2012
This story was nice. I was sad when they died, but happy when I read the ending. And I'm even MORE happy about those points you made.
1. I think so, too. I'm pretty sure Mello helped himself after the explosion. He doesn't seem like the kind of person to seek immidiately for help. Plus, hospitals are obviously out of the question.
2. FINALLY! Why do everyone keep on thinking Mello and Matt knew they'll die? Mello's plan was for Matt to drive to safety. However, Mello did consider his OWN death; not MATT'S. And Matt was obviously shocked when he died.
3. I thought that it was just some kind of place they found to hide for a while and spy on Amane Misa. However, in the Anime, they DO live together, for about a year or so.
To make it short, I'm glad to find someone who's finally thinking as I do. And this story was very beautiful. Near gave me the creeps, but still good. Thanks for sharing!
| LoneBoy7 chapter 9 . 10/19/2008
kinda hard to belive that matt died and mello killed himself,
but hey, its a good story/plot
| yokari chapter 9 . 2/12/2008
ok i wanted to comment your last 'chapter'
first of all
sure matt could be the one to take care of mello after the explosion O:
he could stay there for a day or 2 till he felt better then leave and huh..somehow get to hal. after she made him leave, he could move in with matt permantly, and not just stay over for a couple of days. thought they most likely lived separetly XD or at least i find it most logical
he couldnt posibly know for sure, but he could ASUME they MIGHT die, if something will go wrong. and japanese people are crazy so you never know what to expect out of them. XD and im pretty sure they are smart enought to figure out throwing stuff at kiras tv person is risky XD and there were milion of ways he could die like car accident, heart attack, ehh unknown disease XD so the posability of dieing probably accured to them
and lastly, i donno about whether it was their house, but you obviously never visited mine. if you ever did, you will nevr in your life think anyplace ON EARTH is even slightly unorganized XD when youll be about to think that, youll remember my house and decide that place is super neat XD
well thats all i guess XD
sorry for whatever misspellings i might have and for my too lazy to use capital letters writing whatever XD
have nice life or something XD
| ShinigamiSecrets chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
OI! Lady~! Very nice. :3
It isn't that hard if you rally think of who calls ya lady...
On...Saturday? I'll hopefully start posting the super detailed story: 'Falling Alive'...
If I don't then just note that I'll try to finish 'Poke Pals'.
And Maybe my DN chat. :3
| Kunoichi21 chapter 9 . 2/5/2008
Wow! For your first fanfic, I gotta say, this was pretty good. You had very few spelling/grammar errors, and I'm glad that it was fairly short. Most of the stories I read take forever to finish if they're long, and sometimes I need more than a day. This is why I like short stories! And you had a good plot to it, even if some of the chappies didn't turn out like you wanted them to. So, great job! Happy writing,
Kunoichi21 . -Loves L-
| Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 8 . 1/30/2008
kind of short but it only needed to be this long. i love the concept of it all, and besides a mistake or two it was written perfectly! and if i'm the only reviewer right now i ask WHY becuase this deserves a few reviews. 3