Do a sequel plis

damn, this almost makes me think of this as a visual novel. Good story, I like all the characters so far

Pretty good so far, although I feel like she's not at all grateful to her surrogate parents. It's as though she doesn't care that they decided to take the time out of their lives just to raise her for a portion of her life. She acts as though they're not important which seems a little selfish and maybe even bratty. She doesn't even seem to care when they show concern for her well-being after disappearing for a few days. And why would they get used to her yearly disappearances? They're her caretakers. They're supposed to be worried and even frantic. And the fact that she expects them to "get used to it" just seems unfair. Even though they're not major characters, she could at leave give them some recognition. For obvious reasons, she can't tell them why she disappears around her birthday, but that's no reason to act as though she did nothing wrong. She could take their feelings into regard and maybe apologize for scaring them? That's just my opinion though.

this is very weird

Great story! Love it

I loved it! Can't wait to read sequels!

thanks :)

Super awesome story! Im glad her and Vi'can got together. Time for a sequel I think!

What a lovely story! Thanks for writing it. :D

Great story so far! I'm really enjoying it.

Your story concept is refreshing. Your noticing that Judo may work against Aliens is absolute brilliance. It is the perfect weapon for a human to adopt; especially given the difference in size and strength.

After all, they do say that the bigger you are the harder you fall... (_)

awesome story!

AMAZING STORY!

AAAHHH! I JUST FINISHED! THIS WAS THE BEST THING EVER! I LOVED IT!

SEQUEL BABY! :D

And so it begins! I'm loving it! :D