|Reviews for Blank Pictures|
| sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
love it sad but still i love it and hopefully you will get back to writting...please preatty please with lemons on top
| fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
awe that was sosososo sad
| chst chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I liked it, even if what's it is about.
| The Black Crow chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
really, just... wow...
Very few times a short story manages to squize my heart enough to compell me to write reviews... but this...
I REALLY loved the ending! I must admit I'm a real sucker when it comes to this kind of short finishing sentences that just wrap up all the story, yet you wouldn't understand their real meaning if you haven't read the story itself _
So yeah, great work! ;D You just made another closeted girly/mushy/sappy/overly sensitive soul Very happy! (and tearful ") Hope to read more heart wrenching beautiful stuff from you!
| Llama Mama23 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Little errors, PROOFREAD! Write the "break-up" scene, you can do it! And stop calling it a break-up...it's too undramatic. Edward repeats. Monster truck multiple times, and too peppy on the letter to Renee.
| AzaleaHayden chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
AW...THAT'S SO SAD! I STILL CAN'T GET WHY EDWARD WANTED TO LEAVE BELLA.
| suzoo chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
I can see Edwards side in your writing. It would be nice if you continued it while he chased Victoria scent until he finally joined back with Bella. I know it's alot of chapters, but would be interesting to read from Edwards point of view.
| CrossMyHeart108 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
O.M.G!That was so sad it almost made me cry!
you have got to do a Eddie new moon I know you'd do a grate job at it.
| wolfechica chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I think that you did a fabulous job with this story. It is exactly as I would have pictured him doing these things and exactly as I would think Stephanie Meyer would have written it. I would love to see a story written of EPV during the entire time he was away. Anyway...very nice...
| wild twilight luvver chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
had you not told us readers that you were not stephenie, i'd have thought that you were her, and that you were just copy/pasting her work here!
I can very much see the charisma of Stephenie in ur work here; it's AMAZING. it's not bad either bcuz u probably want this to sound like her. however in other writings not related to twilight, u probably want more originality. just a small comment :D
overall this is freakishly amazing, plz plz plz write more bcuz i love it immensely! xD
Regular lions say ROAARR
Angry lions say BLARGA ROAR! IMMA GOING TO EAT YOU!
Sad lions say roar.
Mountain lions say: OMG EDWARD CULLEN! RUN!
| magical-flying-leprechauns chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
THIS IS OK BUT YOU SHOULD OF MADE IT WITH CHAPTAS NOT JUST A 1 SHOT
| xlookz-can-be-deceivingx chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
ur a gud author
it was soo sad (
| Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
| Mrs. Edward Pattinson chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
this was such a good story, but i cried so hard, your lucky u didn't write the part where edward left because i would have been hysterical! but you are a very good writer and i love all your stories :)
| summonawakenreckon chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Ouch. Is it possible for your heart to hurt? Cause mine does. I hated that part of the book! I cryed. I do, every single time. Why oh why did he leave? He just cam back anyway. -grumbles- Anyway, good plot. BAD STORY, if you know what I mean.