|Reviews for Girls Just Wanna Have Fun|
| bethabetha chapter 61 . 10/4
so far i've really enjoyed this story, but chapter 61 seems waaaay too rushed for me. the girls are supposed to love these guys and instantly believe that they're all marrying someone else the next day? where is the trust? and i'm sorry but the guys forgave them *way* too fast. i'd be hurt as hell that someone i loved and wanted to marry was so quick to believe such an awful thing about me. it would take a lot to get back to normal. my only other issue is that, while i really enjoy the characters, most chapters i just want to slap alice. she's just so damn bossy and annoying. ok i lied one more issue... it's "wandering" not "wondering." that drove me nuts every time it was misused
| michigangal0223 chapter 43 . 5/27
haha special brownies
| TrueBloodxTwilight chapter 33 . 4/8
the last part about love being patient is from a destiny child song that i like.
| peacelovebre chapter 68 . 3/18
This was wonderful! Now on to the sequel.
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/23/2015
Shakes head uh me thinks those r pot brownies & who ever eats them is seriously in trouble lol
| jus2read chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Absolutely loveeeeeeeeed this story D
Not many good onesss with this kind of story linee '))
Onto the sequel
| shelllynn22 chapter 69 . 11/17/2012
Awesome story. I couldn't put it down.
| shelllynn22 chapter 55 . 11/16/2012
Seriously you gotta tell me who sings that because I have been trying to ting that song for a reeeeeaaaaalllllllllly long time.
| Derin chapter 9 . 10/22/2012
Swimming with dolphins... I have to admit that is far from what I consider a good time. Dolphins just scare me. So vicious, despite the cuteness... Scary
This looks to be a great fic, though. Your writing is very good !
| Vampfan1 chapter 69 . 7/19/2012
Wow! Just wow! I am not one to review every chapter and sometimes when I get really into a story, I just hop right through it and don't review until the end so here goes!
Every story has its little flaws. Its misspelled words and occasional gramatical errors. No ones perfect so I'll not mention the little insignificant details. Truthfully yours were not that bad or that frequent. True writers can transcend that stuff with the emotion, characters and plot of the story and take you to wherever they choose. You have done that! I could really relate to the locations where the story takes place having lived near Orlando, Fl for years. Disney is near and dear to my heart. So is Grand Cayman and Sting Ray City. I had extra visuals for this story that some of your readers probably didn't have.
I wont go into huge detail about how the story moved me or made me cry, just know that it did. I will say this. I have read a huge amount of Fan Fiction. Probably more than is considered healthy. I come across a lot of great stories, a lot of good stories and a lot of mediocre stories. Then every once in a while I come across a story that I know is different. A story that I put on a pedestal as one of my all time favorites. A story I will not forget. One of the greats. (think, Tropic of Virgo, The Red Line) Epic stories that will not fade into my brain and quickly be forgotten. This is one of those stories! Love, Love, Loved it! I am so glad I accidentally came across you and your story. I have favorited you as an author and can't wait to see what else you have written. Thank you for sharing your stories. For taking a chance and opening up yourself to praise and criticism. Its not an easy thing to do or hey, I'd have stories on here too, but I don't! I wish you luck in any future stories and hopefully this will not be the last you have heard from me. I hope to be singing your praises for another story in the near future! Until then...:-)
| Louise chapter 45 . 4/17/2012
The song u had on there u missed it up I thought u would like to know but other then that the is great so far
| Color me cruel chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
i have read this story like 3 times and i love it!
| Fred's Hermione chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
| Jenn Jean Cullen chapter 68 . 9/8/2011
| saintfudge chapter 68 . 8/15/2011
thank you for a great story - heaps of chapters but quick to read .. really enjoyed it