it was a great and interesting story until after chapter 20 after that I don't even now what going on with the constant crossover and the time jumps i mean I that this was an salor moon selfinsert not a spider man cross over.

Luna lost her memories! oh no

I finished bing reading this, this is one of the greatest stories I have seen, it’s also similar to a story called “Dial”. I hope you haven’t passed away and that you are still alive. I might send a pm to see if that is the case. I only pray for a response. I don’t care if this will never be finished, I only hope that you are alive and well.

Beautiful. I find it hilarious how anime portrays foreigners in good light and people honestly seem to believe that. No, Japan is extremely rigid. There are restaurants that ban foreigners from entering. All places have their faults, at least it's more honest than American discriminatory habits, but I greatly love how realistic this was.

Dude your formatting of this story is absolute garbage. I'm not sure what you were trying to do when you posted this, but whatever it was it failed miserably. The plot is good but trying to read it through this idiotic whatever the hell it is that you were trying to do with your format is nuts.

Your last update was 6 years ago, and Your reason for taking so long before that was that you were Ill with heart and lung problems. I am hoping you are still alive and have been getting better but just lost interest in all of this. your stories were good. Thank you for writing them.

suppose its probably past the point of you continuing this, but i might as well say that i hope you do, it's quite a good self insert.

yeeeees the spideypool bromance shall reign supreme

Jesus, another crossover?

I know I’m seven years late in this, but it would be nice, if just for once, a villain could be permanently dealt with. There are just too many “villains” now who are here more for cameo sake than any meaningful additions to the plot.

The marvel crossover stuff really needs to stop.

so funny it all is priceless man a good laugh indeed thank you

kei getting Michiru being the second girl would be nice, he liked her enough to date in the first place in both lives, something casual should work better with her though.

please dont tell me you turned ol tuxy into daredevil lol

of course hes gay, with a name like carrot its fairly obvious lol

you are making him out to sound and seem extremely gay... not to mention angstyly stupid lol