|Reviews for Heart: Liability or Asset?|
| FushionAC chapter 3 . 5/25/2011
another good fic I found here...
if you have intention to continue :
Athrun subordinates were cute people
well it's the start, they'll closer through mail interaction, good idea...
it's been 2 years since you update, I hope you have a heart to keep going for this fic, update please..it's a good one...
| shiloah18 chapter 3 . 4/30/2010
"There's going to some sort of naturaL disaster tomorrow!" lol Cags' smiLe is THAT dangerous huh? XD uh.. how about adding a "be" betwEen "to" and "some"?
"...she stammered LoOking at the grander," grander? grander what? .~
"The sLamming door mEet his face..." mEet? met?
I can't beLieve Athrun and co. wouLd actuaLLy be there for Cags whiLe chOosing for her wardrobe... O_O
"We need you to make sure you..." how about omitting the first "you"?
"...he was going to kiLL the next fLuffy animaL he saw...his death grip broke his fifth ceLL phone." oh gawd! quick! hide aLL the fLuffy animaLs! and the ceLLphones! XD
aWw... Cags is a cLoset girLy-girL! lol XD
"YOU'RE IN SOME RANDOM GUYS HOUSE!" GUYS? GUY'S?
lol pOor Cags... being ignored when she's actuaLLy right in front of them... XD
"Than I am absoLuteLy against this!" Than? Then?
Dearka doesn't have a friend? ~. hmm... and he zoned out? just Liked that? O_O that was fast... XD
nyWeiZ, once again.. sorry for the Late review.. *bows* gotta stop being tardy with reviews... *sighs* suteki chap! jaa ne in your next! ;'p
| nareiya chapter 3 . 4/13/2010
i love this fic! it's so wacky yet sensible at the same time!
update, update, update!
| CagalliYulaAthhaZala chapter 3 . 9/30/2009
It's nice to hear that you're back already!
Nice chapter! Lol! I like Athrun here it reminds me of a certain character in a novel pocket book that I read before. _ but more in fact that I like Kira here! He reminds me of my Kira-nii that I knew. XD
Great work! Update soon! XD
| memeylupht chapter 3 . 9/6/2009
oh,how i lov this chapter...
I hope you'll Update soon,don't make 'us' waiting again for far too long... Ok !
'n please make another long chapters for the next one.
I can't wait to see how the stories move on with cagalli wearing a dress,'n what kind of conversation 'they' had to share in those e-mails. I like that part,really ! Surely,U did a great job here... (too) \(_)/ YaY ...!
Thanks for updating..
Lov U 'n keep workin' .~
| memeylupht chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
What did athrun say to cagalli ?
I like this chapt too...
| memeylupht chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Nice Story !
| Stickstrike chapter 3 . 8/29/2009
Hahahaha a crazy Kira! A great chapter! Well, anyways, i hope you update soon!
| CS Fitzgerald chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
hey there ovp.
i dont know if you remeber me or not (if you do don't use my reall name! :) ) .
Anyways. I just wanted to say that your story is..
Wait, sorry, that doesn't really cover it does it?
It puts the zing in amazing.
Seriously, I wont be surpised if in a couple years from now they'll be asking you to write a script for the Gundam Seed series or maybe just a book.
I shall end this review now.
FAVOURITE STORY. SO UPDATE SOON
or i shall track you down.
| An Instant King chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
Yay, you updated! I actually read this a few days ago, but am only just now writing a review, so shame on me.
I think Kira is a bit over done, but I guess if you aren't going to use Meer it makes up for it. But tone him down a little bit.
Poor Cagalli just wants to get her work done, why are people tormenting her? It amuses me that Athrun et al didn't think that Cagalli might be more cooperative about clothes if they weren't heckling her.
One thing I really didn't care for was Cagalli's screen name, I think she would have something a little more creative, like blonde_hibiki. I love Boss_Zala though
| ZalasDinoPants chapter 3 . 8/2/2009
Ah, Kira's overprotective brother mode is love! Kira totally ignored her while talking to Athrun. Poor thing
| Your one only SunflowerSeed chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Morning dear. Nice to see you up and writing when we are out of school. Truthfully Ihaven't read the story, and only saw it when I was digging for gold on . Facebook me or email me or go on MSN so we can hang out at least one day before I leave darling, for you know where, and before you are too busy with your awesome and cooled school.
| Stickstrike chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
wow your story has a really good start! it would be realy amazing if you could write a good middle ending for it! i look forward to reading it!
| Summer chapter 2 . 5/1/2008
OMG u need to update this..
it such a great story..i cant wait till the next chapter
ah! the anticipation is killing me..
what did athrun say to cagalli!
| Milleniumgirlie chapter 2 . 3/21/2008
This is so Nice!keep up the good work and please update!