Reviews for Something is Cracking |
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![]() ![]() I like this a lot. This is exactly the kind of confession i wish had happened between them. And Saxters inner monologue is witty. And i think its still in character |
![]() ![]() ![]() please write a second chapter or sequel! i love reveal fanfics. :) |
![]() ![]() Love it! I couldn't stop reading even if I wanted to. Beautifully written and the characters' voices and reactions are perfect. I love the moment about the boat's name at the end. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Solid writing. Feels like you fumble Dexter’s voice and inner monologue in the beginning, but you’ve definitely stuck the landing by the end. |
![]() ![]() This was an emotional rollercoaster. Also, Debra finally realizing what the name of the boat actually meant was just perfect... Although, I wonder what she would think if she actually tallied up all the deaths Dexter was the cause of, because that is a lot. A wonderful story though, thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If only this could've been the show's story... if only. |
![]() ![]() I loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good fic |
![]() ![]() I just started watching Dexter so I just started reading his fanfictions. I really liked your story. It was well written. Hope this isn't your last. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this quite a bit. |
![]() ![]() OH, you've written the Dexter of the books, and done it superbly! |
![]() ![]() /Perfect/ voice on Dexter. His snarky, dark narration is spot-on, and Deb is just as good, with her jello-over-steel personality just shining here. I loved her catching on to the boat's name. The brother-sister relationship is fabulously written too; I can see myself and my own big brother having a you-fucked-up-bigtime-bro conversation like this (albeit not about serial killing). The best Dexter fic on , I'd say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun fanfic. I love what you did with story and where you took the characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this. Sounded so real to me. I always have my doubts about how Deb would have actually reacted to the revelation about Dexter - I like this more than how the show went about it (so far). |