This needs a sequel.

"The bar isn't terribly crowded, but the floor is, and the air pulsates with a retro beat as some singer declares over and over again that he doesn't feel like dancing. It seems like the majority of the crowd doesn't share his sentiments, though; even the guys on the sidelines are at least bobbing their heads to the rhythm. So I do the same."

You've captured his twisted sense of humor really well. I think the oneshot was very believable as far as Debra accepting Dex, or trying to anyway. Fear, disbelief, anger, disgust. All emotions very well delivered for both brother and sister. You should think of doing longer pieces. Great story!

interesting in a good way :D

Again masterfull. Brilliant.

Nuff said

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Thanks for this. I just finished watching season 2 and immediately set out to find a fic where Deb finds out and you did it very nicely. Cheers!

This is an amazing story. I read the prequel and loved them both. You have the characters spot-on and your writing style is perfect. (I guess being an editor helps.) I love AU's and hope you make a little series out of this! _

I really love your writing. This story is so good. Very riviting, and very true to the characters. A very good 'what could happen' sort of thing. Poor Deb, so much to deal with all at once. It would be interesting to see how she deals with this after having some time to absorb it all.

i found this on livejournal the other day so when i found it here i was jumping up and down like a maniac. are you going to continue with another follow-up? i would love to see it!