|Reviews for Hi, I'm Mr Right, I heard you were looking for me?|
| kacmaryland chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
| FORVER INACTIVE chapter 17 . 7/17/2010
lol I just have to say, that I really appreciate your use of the insurance jingles in this chapter. I'm always getting those jingles stuck in my head and I annoy all my friends with them. I feel better knowing that I'm not the only one who knows those jingles! Okay I'll continue reading your fic now!
| Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 21 . 2/16/2010
Great writing! this story was histarical! Emmett is something else... wow. LMAO! wonderful job! its was really cute! luv it!
| bookworm47xo chapter 22 . 12/21/2009
I really enjoyed reading this story!:) There were a couple of points that I thought were a little...idk..it was just a little immature, but other than that I thought it was great! btw, there ARE walmarts in Chicago.
| cpagirl chapter 22 . 12/8/2009
umm okay, so lets get something straight... i dont know who told you this story was childish or whatever, but ITS SO NOT. ITS AMAZING. Honestly, whoever said that must have been extremely jealous and just wanted to make you feel bad. dont listen to them. theyre lying :]
| Luvntwilight chapter 22 . 12/8/2009
I realy enjoy your stories and your writing. Don't let nasty comments get you down...just ignore them.
| lilroses123 chapter 15 . 12/6/2009
Um really don't mean to be offensive saying this but I think you need a beta that is a bit older than you and help you work out the kinks. It's not quite college level, as in their out fits are very...childish, even when they are trying to be sexy and the dialog is not up to par with their level of maturity in the story. They are supposed to be freshman in college and even as a junior in High school I would never say some of this or wear these things, it's more middle schoolish/ freshmanish. Also Bella's character might need some more confidence and some more of the qualities of the Bella in Twilight.
| alicefan98 chapter 21 . 11/25/2009
| fallenoutofgrace chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
i phones arent that cool...
i like it! keep writing
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 4 . 1/30/2009
"Me and Bella" *scoff* it is "Bella and I" gr.
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 3 . 1/30/2009
I have an odd obsessions with iPhones too lol.
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 2 . 1/30/2009
Haha who would have thought Edward was an old man killer?
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I like it so far
| thedownbeat chapter 3 . 1/28/2009
I actually like airplanes.
| thedownbeat chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Is it Emmett?