|Reviews for Vampire Older Sister|
| ifairyu chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
YOU DONT HAVE TO BEG FOR REVIEWS WHEN UR WRITING IS THIS GOOD!
PLEASE WRITE MORE, I WANT TO KNOW HOW ITS GOING TO WORK OUT BETWEEN ASHLEY AND ALEX! I KNOW ITS BEEN AWHILE SINCE YOU UPDATED, BUT IM BEGGING... PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR IM GOING TO FREAK!
| buckichick22 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
yea go alice
| EmmettCullen chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
BIG TEDDY BEAR? BIG TEADY BEAR? HOW COULD U? IM ONLY LIKE THAT NEAR U PEOPLE, CUS I WOULD HAVE QUITE A FEW BRUISES IF I DIDN'T CENSOR MY ACTIONS/WORDS, THAT OR I WOULDN'T HAVE ANY BRUISES AT ALL (YOU WOULDN'T BE MY FRIEND).
| ann smith chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
your story is really good...please keep writing(and soon!)
| sporkchief chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
you didn't tell me you ha d another story in the works!I am ...pleasantly surprised!
good plot, but it needs...something. Im not really sure...maybe some more details? ya know? a couple similes, maybe a metaphor here or there, add a couple of adjectives...
other than that...good!
the amazing and always entertaining...BEKAH!
| Singerboi chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
This seems like it'll be really good! UPDATE!
| AtlasandAdia chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Interesting idea! Its not bad ) keep writing!