I'm over and done with this fic. The premise is fairly new for this crossover. I haven't seen anyone else use it besides mad_fairy, but where mad_fairy succeeded, you failed. You choose to make your plotting easy by utilising canon too much. That's a failure because if I wanted to read canon, I'd read canon.

Change things, and not just superficially. Having Sirius escape early is still canon, because Sirius still escaped. Change Harry's friends, change canon events, at least do something.

The first two chapters weren't needed. You could have started the story hetere on this chapter. The content of the first two chapters could be used as flashbacks instead.

Wow, this is a really nice crossover:) I really think both of them would benefit from a brother figure, especially since the mind link also gave them both a place where they could just be without their predujeced environemt. which would be a huge benefit in itself I was very surprised at your "conclusion" of the Voldemort situation - I never expected you to just whishk them into Naruto's world along with Harry :o Really wanna read where they all go from this, now

Harry's evil twin... That's wonderful, beautiful, and you are hereby one of the best Naruto writers ever! I can't stop grinning and laughing about it!

Killing sirius off in front of the strongest wizard...best way to get flamed or death threats lol.

Umbridge is just one of those characters that you just love to hate.

While I’m sad a sequel has yet to be posted. I am incredibly happy to see that the story ended at this point of the plot. It is a satisfying end. Thank you for writing this! There were minimal plot holes, good character development, logical/reasonable decisions made by characters in line with their personalities, interesting twists, and it was well written with minimal spelling errors. Overall? It’s a story I will happily recommend. Thanks again for writing it. It was definitely worth the time to read it.

The signature bit actually works the other way around. If the bank can't read it pretty well anything will pass as yours.

I don't like wands.
No, I hate the concept of wands.

They are nothing more than a crutch. Take the wand away from the wizard/witch and they are useless.
It's why 'Expelliarmus' is so devastating in a magic fight. You literally stip your opponent of their ONLY defense.
Nevermind how feeble the things are.

One could argue that wands make spell-casting easier and more precise, but I think that's just something some wizard official said to make citizens easier to control.

At some points in this you give me sch hope you will change cannon, the brief flashes of intuitive Harry in particular show are brilliant, I love his questioning things and how the knock on effect helps both him and Naruto. However this makes it doubly painful to see you force parts of the cannon universe to happen which in my eyes in your universe shouldn't.

Such as Harry being a push over for Ron, your Harry already stated he didn't like bullies and is more aware of people's flaws. This early on he should have identified Ron's and with out the connection they'd built up by 3rd year in cannon (when Ron's flaws became apparent then) Harry shouldn't have befriended him. Your Harry even pointed out his distasteful behavior, how he treats Hermione (considering Harry also put effort in where Ron doesn't/is more similar to her) should have him disliking him. Then the whole part with Ron inviting himself along to Hagrid's, accepting the duel, to me your Harry shouldn't have put up with that, your version is almost worse tan cannon Harry because your doesn't have an excuse to act like a door mat.
You did later have them point ut his flaw but that was initiated by Neville and it should have never reached that point because I still stand by the fact you Harry should have never wanted to hang out with some on like Ron in the first place. That said Nevile - he gives me hope for this fic, seeing him stand up for Hermione was awesome! Just like Naruto and Lee friendship, t's a good change which shows the ripple effect.
Then we have the Snape thing. Detentions for a year? Cannon Snape wouldn't get away with that because that long time period would be noticed and questioned why and wouldn't stand up. There is a reason he mainly took away house points. Also when does Harry have time to do anything with all these detentions, why didn't your more independent Harry go to a teacher about them? He is clearly closer to his head of house so why didn't he tell her? All this said, I do think there is potential. Some shining moments of awesome *cough*Choji*cough* so I am glad you posted it.

At some points in this you give me sch hope you will change cannon, the brief flashes of intuitive Harry in particular show are brilliant, I love his questioning things and how the knock on effect helps both him and Naruto. However this makes it doubly painful to see you force parts of the cannon universe to happen which in my eyes in your universe shouldn't.

Such as Harry being a push over for Ron, your Harry already stated he didn't like bullies and is more aware of people's flaws. This early on he should have identified Ron's and with out the connection they'd built up by 3rd year in cannon (when Ron's flaws became apparent then) Harry shouldn't have befriended him. Your Harry even pointed out his distasteful behavior, how he treats Hermione (considering Harry also put effort in where Ron doesn't/is more similar to her) should have him disliking him. Then the whole part with Ron inviting himself along to Hagrid's, accepting the duel, to me your Harry shouldn't have put up with that, your version is almost worse tan cannon Harry because your doesn't have an excuse to act like a door mat.
You did later have them point out his flaw but that was initiated by Neville and it should have never reached that point because I still stand by the fact you Harry should have never wanted to hang out with some on like Ron in the first place. That said Nevile - he gives me hope for this fic, seeing him stand up for Hermione was awesome! Just like Naruto and Lee friendship, t's a good change which shows the ripple effect.

Then we have the Snape thing. Detentions for a year? Cannon Snape wouldn't get away with that because that long time period would be noticed and questioned why and wouldn't stand up. There is a reason he mainly took away house points. Also when does Harry have time to do anything with all these detentions, why didn't your more independent Harry go to a teacher about them? He is clearly closer to his head of house so why didn't he tell her? All this said, I do think there is potential. Some shining moments of awesome *cough*Choji*cough* so I am glad you posted it.

I feel all giddy inside from Harry’s cunningness and sly ventures. I always get hyped up when people get justice in legal, but also entirely revengeful ways. Like, all that proof will go against them and it’s making me SO happy. This chapter improved my mood.

This chapter has cemented my love for this story. Especially the ending. I can’t believe Naruto is suspicious of Kabuto for that reason. That’s hilarious. I have loved reading this and can’t wait to finish it.

I did not expect the evil Harry twin thing. I would've done an anime style face plant, and sweat drop if it were possible But I did do a brow-twitch thing lol

I think Naruto will need all of his chakra/magic when he's fighting Haku and Sasuke is unconsious. If not then sometime during the chunin exams/war.