Reviews for Strength of Brothers
Guest chapter 18 . 9/22
I have a bone to pick. The henge is a physical transformation not an illusion. The bunshin is a ninjutsu. I know this is kinda au but these just aren't how genjutsu work. Genjutsu is using Chakra to disrupt the minds of your targets. If these were genjutsu they would be useless because they would only affect the people you used them on and you wouldn't be using them on yourself. There are ways to look for the henge no jutsu, and they are looking for imperfections or unusual Chakra signatures or unnatural movements. You can't use genjutsu dispelling methods to see through them. Even with the sharingan you only have an easy time of spotting the irregularities but you can't dispel someone's ninjutsu.
umaiwe chapter 32 . 9/1
Too bad your so called trilogy never had it's chance of releasing 2nd and 3rd instalment, however I genuinely had fun reading this in between my break time.
StrangestQuark chapter 32 . 1/13
Cool story, sad that the next part never got made, but definitely worth the read regardless. Thanks for sharing!
Shinobi Gatana chapter 3 . 1/3
I have read this once many years ago... I never saw past chapter 13. The finished product is appreciated
yrlastin chapter 10 . 12/25/2022
Sannin is a title not a rank.
Special Jounin is a chunin with jounin skill in one or two skill paths.
Erizar chapter 15 . 12/23/2022
This was so incredibly forced. The series of moronic decisions required for this death to happen... No one thought to incapacitate the Peter? Or at least Disarm him? No one took steps to at least shield the children from Peter? Sirius jumping in front is in keeping with his character, Snape being blinded by hatredl, again in character. But everything else was so forced that I've lost most interest in the story :/
ChibiChula chapter 32 . 11/24/2022
Aww... It's over. I don't think you ever posted a part two either so I'm sad now, especially since you left off right when they were finally in the same world but about to be separated in another way. It's sad. I think I'm just going to pretend that once they get a certain distance from each other that the dreamscape comes back or that Harry finds a way to make communication mirrors like the the ones in HP cannon from some of the more advanced books he got within a month or two, lol. Here's hoping that you're alive and well and that you somehow come back to this story someday. Cheers! 3
ChibiChula chapter 31 . 11/24/2022
Wait, now I'm confused because you said that Harry got the compensation money because lots of the old government were fired due to everything uncovered for his lawsuits including the minister but I seem to remember Fudge being there when Dumbledore got that evidence sent via Fawkes immediately after the trial... Did I somehow miss a time skip after the trial to when he got the compensation money? I might be remembering wrong but I thought those events happened close together and it would take a while to replace a good chunk of ministry workers. I might have to re-read that part.
ChibiChula chapter 27 . 11/24/2022
Yay for devious Harry! Even bigger YAY for possible no pairings! This story does not really need them unless you want to write a mention in an epilogue for some reason, or a part 2. I'm glad I kept reading.
ChibiChula chapter 26 . 11/24/2022
Oh... Harry is finally going to go all out on his shinobi/Slytherin nature, huh? This might be fun.
ChibiChula chapter 25 . 11/24/2022
Hahaha... The outtake/omake was hilarious. Plus, pretty much how that would really work out, I think.

BTW, Happy Thanksgiving!
ChibiChula chapter 24 . 11/24/2022
Muggle book (and possibly other things) shopping might be fun. I somehow thought that you had included that since Harry was staying at essentially the gateway to the muggle world the whole summer but I then realized you hadn't with the review/question you got. Thankfully someone pointed it out!
ChibiChula chapter 22 . 11/24/2022
YAY for not leaving anything for the vultures! ...And being prepared, of course, lol.
ChibiChula chapter 18 . 11/23/2022
Um... Parseltounge is the language not the ability. Harry is a parselmouth that speaks parseltounge. _;
ChibiChula chapter 16 . 11/23/2022
Huh... If I had caught this story while you were still writing it I would have suggested a sheltie for Naruto's animagus form. It's how I see him most of the time anyway. The form would also suite cannon Harry but your version of him feels more like a raven/crow to me. Then again there are so many different possibilities...
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