Reviews for Not Good Enough
YourxMuse chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
That's really sad :(

You should add onto this, and give it a happy ending? :)
loverof naley chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Aww Kelly, that was heartbreaking. I felt so bad for Haley feeling like no one cared about her. She seemed sad throughout not recieving the support from her family that she deserves. Then to top it off they completely brushed her off when she called home acting like her call to them was a bother. They didnt even seem all that concerned that she was coming home, that's sad.

I was glad she had her writing to concentrate on. At least that was darn that Nathan for ignoring the greatness of Hales, moron.

Loved it girlie.
LiZ457 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
please update asap! i think this could be good.
steffy2106 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
aw so cute story but at the same time so sad :( She dreams her life instead of living it...It's a dangerous game.
nevershoutallison chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
great story!

i love the emotions in the story

xoxo

Allison
OnlyEdwardsGirl chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
That was great, too bad it's just one chapter! really would love to read more chapters of it! ttys
the fourth drink instinct chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Aww, poor Haley. Maybe you could write another one where she meets him? Lol, and they fall in love.. Sorry, total romantic lol. But it was good, you should def write more D X
laperkin chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
cool story- i feel bad about Haley though... maybe she could really talk to Nathan ;) lol.
babiiSCARS23 chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
hey that was so great! PLEASE would you consider making it a longer story? please let me know thank you
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN LONGER. BUT ITS OK.
ItalHunni28 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
sad...bittersweet, I love it! And don't worry, your inspiration will come, just give it some time.