this is rally interesting please do continue i do have one question how will hikaru play other people not ever one is honest or will sai help with those how try to cheat him because he is blind?

Yes yes please continue this story, it's really good. The story is quite original, I've read fics where Touya is blind but I've never read one where Hikaru is. It's a hard situation for Hikaru as he is always energetic and can't set still, it'll be interesting to see how Hikaru grows up and if his blindness changes him a lot.

I wonder what Hikaru will think of Sai, I'm really looking forward to it.

It's a really good start to the story, it gets you interested and makes you want to read more! Hope you update soon_

Is interesting history!

But I lost it.. In this history, Is Hikaru a pro, he is? I think that history is after Sai leave... Or is the first time he meet Sai?

If he is a Pro, what happend with his friends? and Touya, he know about the accident?

Please continue this fic!

It looks very interesting. I'd enjoy seeing how this development will affect Hikaru and Sai's relationship, among other things. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing too off-setting. One thing I would inform you of is that in Japanese, the plural form of a word is exactly the same as the single form, you don't add an 's' (say, at the end of "kami"), the singular or plural use is implied by the context of the sentence it's used in... I'm only pointing this out because I cringe at reading Japanese words with 's' at the end...

It's a good start, though. I can't wait to read more! :)

pretty interesting start. update soon )

I know I'm very interested to see what happens next. :3 I love seeing AU fics that explore how everything else changes if the protagonist were different in some way.

This is a great story! I love it and I know one of my friends who reads when she has the spare time will to!

a good start and an interesting plot. can't wait to read more.

an interesting concept

Most definitely interested to read more! It's hard to tell from just this first chapter, but you do have a good plot and your grammar is quite good. Those are two must-haves for me. I hope you decide to continue. I'd like to see how you would choose to develop Hikaru and Sai's relationship.

Looking forward to more, TanteiNeko

this is cool you should continue it.

I like the beginning of this story. Keep at it. _

Go! continue writing! this story has potential. when is touya coming out? :P waiting for updates...:D

This is really great! An interesting idea!

There's not a whole lot I can say about this yet. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling errors. Your descriptions of things appear well done. The concept is interesting and I will read more if you post it.