Reviews for New Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is absolutely hilarious! And Bella knocks my pants off; got to love her voice in this. Very happy that the "star-crossed" lovers are now back in one place. Mmmm please more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any chance you're planning on continuing this story? Because it's relatively awesome. I totally love it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it, Love it, Love it ! You must write more! I need to know who this Paris is and what he's here for! Seriously though. Are you writing more? :S |
![]() ![]() wright more, wright more, wright more... or else. DahDahdahhhh |
![]() ![]() ![]() A TRULY ENTERTAINING STORY ... TY I EVEN LOL'D IN SOME PLACES... MY KIND OF HAHA MIXED WITH MY SARCASM TOO LOL KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK TAKE CARE SHARON E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When is the rest coming? I really like the way you did this story as journal entries :) but hurry if with the rest ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great even though I only read one chapter but still it's good! And btw I have a story with the same title! How cool is that! Haha I got all excited when I read Ur title anyway good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God what a funny story! I love Paddy! this is an effing comical story, funniest i've read in a while! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How someone could come up with such a random story I have no clue but this was hillarious. FelicityT |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMFAO! 3 The ending: "On second thought, Rose, gimme my videocamera." This story had me laughing for like 10 minutes straight, ohmigod, I love you for writing this! :D Anyways. Kay, bye :). P.S.: I love paddy (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS. IS. AMAZING. I've always had a thing for cynicism (is that spelled right?) and I LOVE your story. It is FABULOUS. Keep writing. It takes as long as it takes. I'll be here when you're ready to publish another chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey. Ive only just started to read fanfiction and I just found this but I would like to say I think this story is awesomeness. I dont think I've laughed so much while reading anything. I really hope that this will be updated sometime in future and I cant wait! |
![]() ![]() Lovely girl, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I've missed this story! Your sarcasm inserted into this Bella is so charming and funny (ex. "make your kidney into a hat")! And wow Paris was really creepy! And then the reunion with Edward was a relief and thrilling the way you wrote it. And finally Emmett dispells the haunting tone of this entire chapter with his line. Now that they're together again, I expect to know what the heck is going on in the next chapter. And I really want to see Paris again! |