|Reviews for As Bella Sleeps|
| redwolfeyes chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
This is so sweet! It makes me want to read Midnight Sun all the more...I can't wait to read an entire book from Edward's point of view! I have to say, though, that you did nearly as good a job with this scene as Meyer could have herself.
| babaazey chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
great story! please keep up with the good work!
| NoNameUser chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Wow, excellent. Absolutely beautiful, really. :) This is one of the best Edward characterizations I've read in forever... lol. :D It would be awesome if you could turn it into a Midnight-Sun kinda story, having it go through Twilight in Edwards POV. Either way, I give you lots and lots of kudos for this story.
| sammiepie chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
AW! so cute! loved it.
bella and edward forever :D
| Maximum-Twilight-Ride chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
Wo! Go you!
| Kuroi Garyuu chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
wow! i must say to you congratulations and I hope you win! :D
| Eillac chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Very well written, you did a lovely job with it. I wrote a poem similar to this a few months ago.
| silly bj chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Seriously, this is 'serious' writing. You are one of the few authors I've read that the characters voices, in my head, are the same as when I read SM's books. Your stories are wonderful, blondie, keep on writing. Thanks for all your time, talent and imagination.
| harem chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Wow! I had yet to find an author who I felt caught the "true" Edward, or how is to me at least. So many make him so much more shallow than I expect and apparently uncomplicated when I don't think that is him at all. I think he's angsty, stubborn, deep, over-analytical, and high-strung. I mean that in the nicest way possible of course. I still think he's basically perfect. I just think there's a lot to him and I think it is a lot harder for him when it comes to Bella than any of us could realize. I really do love him and I just hate seeing his character cheapened the way some authors do. But I think you've done very well at capturing ALL of Edward. His worries and thoughts, but also his joys and excitement at being filled with love for the first time. My review is almost as long as your one-shot! I'm sorry! I just got so excited to read something from someone who doesn't make Edward seem like more of simpleton than the passionate, deep person he is to me. Thank you!
| a-r-i-s-a-d-e-l-e-t-e-d chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
WOW! That was incredibly done. I wish you'd do the whole thing- not just a oneshot. Hysterical how Rosalie is thrilled at the prospect that Edward might have eaten her! Lol! And I love how he answered them! Too cute! I'm going to go read more of your stories now...
| BluSkye425 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
I loved this one-shot. It was beautiful!
| Butterscotch Peach chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Just wow. Reading your fanfictions is just amazing. I think I might stalk you now.
Your writing is so beautiful! Have you written a novel yet? -tease-
I'm off to read more of your writing! x3
| sah11679 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Beautifully written! My heart was filled, just like Edward's, while reading this piece. You are definitely a talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
| FeatherHailfrost chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Aw, that was adorable! Sorry, I'm in a fluff-loving mood, and that was perfect!
| xXxElianexXx chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Oh my goodness- this is absolutley beautiful and a brilliant piece of writing!