Reviews for As Bella Sleeps
xXxElianexXx chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
Oh my goodness- this is absolutley beautiful and a brilliant piece of writing!
DreamingLillies chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
aw...that was great! You really have a nack for writing EPV's they're always perfect! ah, this was just so sweet...

-Jenna
HarmonicalMe chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Wow I loved this story! You made it sound exactly like how Stephenie Meyer would describe Edward's feelings to Bella's confession. I encourage you to keep writing, you are definietely talented in this area.
coquelicotte chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Lovely. Just...lovely. Really well written, also.

Vanity Is Precious
steph.c chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Another great story! I often wondered what Edward thought about what he heard Bella say that night and this is great. Fabulous story. This story shows how happy Bella makes Edward and his happiness after hearing her talk. You are an amazing author to be able to capture the characters thoughts and personalities (Rosalie's!) so accurately. Loved it!
Howardgirls2003 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
If I saw this as the work Of The Stephenie herself, I would truly believe it... You have a GIFT!
Aldara Gaea chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Gah... beautiful. I really loved that. And I thought it was very interesting that Edward was already entertaining thoughts of her as a vampire - a lot of people tend to forget that, even though he objects to her about it, he does actually want her to be changed...
dlhk chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Loved it. I seriously feel like I'm reading "the real thing." You write beautifully and I love getting insight on Edward.
IsabellaMCullen chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Wow ... if I didn't know better, I would swear this came right out of Stephenie's mind! I feel that your characterization of Edward and all the Cullen's is dead on. Great job - I look forward to reading more of your works.
XxAlwaysForeverxX chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Aww, that was so frekaing sweet and adorable! :)
lisadianemill chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I usually don't read one shots but your other story I read was so good I decided to read everything you wrote. Once again this one was outstanding.
Mizra chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Ah. the glory of first love! How, even now, it makes me swoon, like I'm on high on it, too.

It's the little points of view, the in-between times, that I like about these stories. It ties up my questions nicely.
NoMoreThanUsual chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
That was great! I loved it!
Fleur de Lioncourt chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Oh my God. That was breathtaking. I have nothing else to say than 'Congratulations for such a GREAT oneshot'. I really mean it (:
oO-Alice-Cullen-Oo chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Wow! I absolutely love this! It's been awhile since I've found a good Twilight fan-fic that made me forget I was reading something and not actually there! Fantastic!

-Alice C.
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