|Reviews for As Bella Sleeps|
| wishimight chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Sigh. This was really beautifully written. I agree with others. I think you captured Edward perfectly. I would LOVE to read more! :)
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
aw i love how proud edward is when he says "i kissed her". he is such a sweetheart!
| argeneau chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
That is incredible! You have captured Edwards character and emotions fantastically, it seems like it could have been a direct excerpt from Midnight Sub itself, infact I know that a few Twilight fans thought this was an actual leaked chapter so that shows just how precise you have been in capturing SM's essence and thus creating a work of art that is worthy of being in Midnight Sun.
I would love to see your 'Edward' interpretations of other pivotal scenes from the 4 books, shall keep a look out as you're very talented.
| UnhealthyAddiction2 chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
Oh, just kidding, I thought there was more than one chapter. Well, I will definitely be checking out your other stories . . . sooner than I expected!
| UnhealthyAddiction2 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Oh. My. Edward. I've only read this first chapter and I'm getting warm tinglies up and down my spine. I love your writing, and the thoughts from him match so closely with the way that I see him it's unreal. I LOVE this story and I can't wait to read more (alas, I must sleep now). You are very talented! I'll be checking out your other stories.
| mybrandofheroin1 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
so this was pretty much amazing.
| angelbattle chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
i register myself in this site only to make a reviw for you fic...
amazing! you wrute very well...the grammar is good, you dont use the tipical adjectives that use s. meyer...you have re invented them and added your own style...that very important..u have read A LOT of fic wuth the word" my favourite crocked smile" repeated at least two or theree times...
-the plot is right...i really imagine Edward thinking that sort of things...you have recreated the character very well...
i should see how it continues...
pd: sorry for the grammar, im not a natural english speaker
| bippityboppity chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
nice...please update again..
| A. Lincoln chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
This makes me even more excited for Midnight Sun! :)
| The Twilight Awards chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Congratulations! This story has won first place for Best One-Shot at the Twilight Awards!
The Twilight Awards
| Grey's-Harry-Fan chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
wow i can see why this won an award well done
| XxlirxX chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
| kajibot chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
Your story has been nominated in "The Romancetastic Round" of The Twilight Awards for the following categories:
Best "I Love You" (completed story)
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| 9thgradefiction chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
P.S. I think you should write more Edward's personality stories. You've got him perfectly! :D
| 9thgradefiction chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
That was fantastic! Gosh, I think you got Edward's personality exactly right. Not over doing anything, or under doing (lol I tend to make up my own words) or in other words, you kept him in perfect charater. Well done! :D
Hope things goes well for the book you want to publish. :)