Reviews for Baby, You Wouldn't Last
francis17pr chapter 53 . 2/27
I love it so much. Such a great story
ch. 53 chapter 6 . 2/17/2013
loved this hope to see a new story bout these two soon
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I've never condoned affairs but can accept that its not always an act intended to hurt close ones.
jdubbs chapter 53 . 9/25/2011
OMG! I love this story! It was so good! I love Averie, she is too cute. So glad Chae & Jake got together and Brooke & Lucas finally stopped being stubborn and worked it out. Great story!
craxygirl54 chapter 53 . 6/4/2011
It took me a while but because I loved this story sooooo much I keep reading and reading even when there were some parts that made me want to stop. You probably know which parts I'm talking about so I won't hi into detail about that. Anyways I am incredibly happy that I was able to finally finish this amazing story. After reading the final chaoter u started thinking back to how everything started. Brooke and Luke have come a long way since they've met. They had their ups and many downs they've had trust issues long separations that I didn't like but they managed to overcome everything and have their happily ever after. Your story was amazing and I wished I could have found it earlier so that I could have reviewed every chaoter but sadly I didn't. Thank you so much for writing this it was amazing reading a story about Brucas that started as an affair that was just all fun that suddenly turned into something as serious as what they got at the end. This of course is going into my favorites list.
Brucas-causelivingsnotenough chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I absolutely LOVED this story! I don't know if you check your reviews since you finished it a year and a half ago but i thought it wouldn't harm to leave one! I really live Averie in this story and i'm not really a big baby fan really as i tend to prefer college and high school fics but i thorougly enjoyed this one. I was genuinelly gutted when Brucas lost their baby and i've been absorbed in this story so much from the very first chapter!
Hoover05 chapter 50 . 8/10/2010
I dont understand when she keeps saying she is starting to be able to trust luke he never cheated on her so why should she have a trust problem with him.
Hoover05 chapter 21 . 8/7/2010
Hey I have enjoyed your story so far. I've always liked Lucas and Brooke as a couple. However you wouldn't resign from basketball you would retire. I hope you have him continue playing basketball though.
Julchen1515 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
I like it
BrucasxNaleyxJeyton27 chapter 23 . 11/28/2009
I love your story and it makes me sad that Laley arent friends. I still have 30 chapters left though and i am like obsessed with your story
MissUnderstoodByLIGHT8907 chapter 53 . 9/12/2009
great story.. I stayed up until 5 30 am to finish this. It was worth it.
Brucas1992 chapter 53 . 9/11/2009
I can't believe the story is over :( I love this story and have done since i first started to read it. You should be proud of what you have written here.

As for the chapter, it was the perfecting end to an fastastic story. I honestly can say that this is the best story i have ever read without a doubt.

Hope you write another story which is just as good :) :)
iluvmedou chapter 53 . 9/9/2009
AMAZING! Compleatly adored this story. It has everything! Be proud of your work :)) Thank you xx
miralinda chapter 53 . 9/8/2009
I really enjoyed reading this one. thank you for writing such a great story
superstargirl7 chapter 53 . 9/8/2009
Wow! In one word- amazing!

And now in a few more: ;-)

I truly LOVED this story from the moment I first found it and until the very last word! I thought that you did a fabulous job bringing the different characters to life, expressing the many developments, changes and obstacles they were having throughout the story and taking your readers into an incredible journey along with Brooke and Lucas.

Your writing is amazing and your story-telling skills are truly rare! I really want you to know that I think you did an awesome job with this story and that I hope to see more of your writing soon!

So- once again- you did a wonderful job! I've enjoyed every minute of reading this story! ;-)
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