Reviews for Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone
sbmcneil chapter 9 . 10/26/2017
I don't think Harry and his friends were acting like bullies. Hermione kept inserting herself in their friendship. Not wanting to be friends with someone who keeps criticizing you isn't the same as bullying at all.
RHJunior chapter 6 . 7/18/2017
Trevor is a toad. Bit of an important difference...
Frogs can swim. Toads can't.
Thisisaprettylongusername chapter 12 . 7/5/2017
The part with "king of the Britons" had me laughing. I've been watching Monty Python.
nayin1704 chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
tristen chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
it is bad
Fast Frank chapter 18 . 1/8/2015
Overall comment: Good but too flawed to be great.
Fast Frank chapter 15 . 1/8/2015
So where were Crabbe and Goyle during all this?
Fast Frank chapter 10 . 1/8/2015
Causality issues here: I just can't see Fred and George, if not Percy, accompanying Ron. And I never could see anybody at all, much less the board, buying Hermione's 'cover story'.
Fast Frank chapter 6 . 1/8/2015
A toad is not a frog. I'm really surprised to see such a lapse, here.
AlwaysaQueenofNarnia445 chapter 14 . 12/27/2014
Thank you for having my favorite Narnia Queen in this chapter.
stars90 chapter 18 . 10/13/2014
This was a fantastic story! The differences in the characters, Arthur, the ending with Snape, how Harry caught onto Quirrel, how Neville became the fourth Golden Kid, how Harry and Ginny became so close even barely seeing each other. Top to bottom I loved it. I'm thrilled to go off and read the sequel!
Epeefencer chapter 6 . 9/19/2014
You keep switching Trevor from a Frog to a Toad and back. Toads and frogs are two different things. Trevor is a toad, by the way.
Blitzstrahl chapter 7 . 6/28/2014
Oh fuck's sake that's enough, Sirius and or Remus never even warned Harry about Snape?! That's it can't read anymore :/
Blitzstrahl chapter 6 . 6/28/2014
Come on moRon the parasite still latches onto Harry, and no one thought to tell Harry what family's to know and avoid at all? what was the point in being raised by Sirius if he's a complete idiot to magical society JUST LIKE IN CANNON? Not once was Harry allowed to read a magical publication? No Daily Prophet, Quibbler, Witch Weekly, Wizards weekly, Quidditch monthly, Duelist League report ever?!
Blitzstrahl chapter 5 . 6/28/2014
Eh your just forcing the plot elements at this point, Harry must be put on the path of finding the stone, Check
No Horcrux but still must have the 11in. holy wand check, Hagrid must praise the very air Dumbledore exhales, and so forth.
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