|Reviews for Number Twenty Eight|
| angiewan601 chapter 7 . 9/27
| Y chapter 15 . 9/14
It actually made me cry. It felt all so real, it could have happened in the anime. Now that I think about it, it would've made a much, MUCH greater movie than SSoM and CoS combined. The only problem is that this was maybe too awfully heartbreaking, even for FMA. But yeah, thanks for writing this, and never ever delete this fic because the feels should be saved forever.
| Elaine Weasley chapter 7 . 8/6
Colonel Bastard...I just laughed at that. My little sister was sitting next to me while I started cracking up, and she didn't know why I was laughing but she started to do so as well. That was fun...better than crying about anything else you've written...
| SarahDrav3n chapter 15 . 7/23
IT WAS FANTASTIC! Thank you for your work!
| skepsis66 chapter 15 . 7/17
What a phenomenal story. It was as beautiful as it was agonizing and it had me in tears practically every chapter. Thank you for sharing this!
| fuyu chapter 15 . 7/17
oh my god. it was absolutely amazing and it made me cry like 3 times. I applaud you on your brilliant ability to write amazing stories. Thank you so much for gracing this world with your lovely works3
| Melody Raindo chapter 15 . 4/23
What the HELL was that rollercoaster of emotions. What the HELL. I demand an explanation. No. No. What the HELL. No. No way.
In other news, guess who just finished marathoning this fic in one day... ahhahaha... it's so good, especially towards the end. What a ride. Thank you for a truly spectacular angsty FMA fic. Damn.
| KalaPrideHomunculus chapter 1 . 4/7
Too many Feels...crying...dying...too many Feels...too many Feels...too many Feels...
| the Candle Joker chapter 15 . 3/21
God I still love this fic so much. It's so well written, the characters are really believeble, it makes me laugh and cry no matter how many times I read it. It's still one of my favorite FMA fanfics 3 Even though it's been years since you wrote it - thank you so much for writing and sharing this wonderful fic!
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 15 . 2/25
Duuuuude. neat work here.
inteeeense... and kinda... dark...
but neat. I liked it.
| Moriko chapter 7 . 2/16
Don't ever take this fanfic down please :)
I've read it like a million times and I love it, not like, but love it! Every once in a while I read it again. You're writing style is very nice to read and just enough showing and telling to keep the whole story interesting. The idea of the story itself is also amazing. So amazing that I wished that I thought of it, but I probably wouldn't be able to write it as well as you do!
So please don't ever take it down, so I and probably many many others can keep enjoying it! -
Kudos to you!
| AlchemicAliens chapter 15 . 2/8
I'm crying because this fanfiv was just too beautiful and I can't even
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 11 . 1/7
DONT U DARE!
Dx (you know what i'm talking about! probably...)
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 9 . 1/7
Eauughhh... aww, nooo, man... so, are the limbs gonna like pop off or something!? that's gonna be awkward... Dx
| ArcanePracti-cat chapter 8 . 1/7
hahaha, squirrels are indeed loud... and sometimes birds too...
ah, yay! Al's comin back now. he can help. :D