|Reviews for Number Twenty Eight|
| Sagacious Strix chapter 15 . 2/26
I can't stop thinking about this story. This was the perfect mix of gore, humor and tragedy all thrown into one. I commend your ability as an author and thank you for bringing this story to life.
| Miss Effie T chapter 15 . 2/1
Your story has to be one of the best FMA stories I've read so far. It was amazing! Great job :)
| Scrap Metal Skeleton chapter 15 . 2/1
That was such a heart-wrenching story; completely beautiful! I nearly thought Mustang euthanized him at two points in the story! It had me smiling and laughing at some points and then crying like a baby at others. That aspect of literature is great in keeping the reader's attention on the story and you definitely pulled it off with flying colours. The initial themes and plot of the story are very unique and very well-executed. VERY well done - the best fan-fiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
| W.W chapter 15 . 1/27
I need a tissue.
I think I'm crying here at midnight while everyone's asleep, and I don't want to wake them up. Maybe I should focus on my review and finding a Kleenex box.
Well, first I'll start with the fact that I was led here by someone who put a link on DeviantArt. So, being curious old me, I clicked on it. I wasn't expecting this to be so...so painful. I mean...It didn't just tug at my heartstrings; it just about ripped them. In the best possible way, of course, assuming that makes any sense.
Sevlow, you've done something not many people can do. You've gotten me to cry with a FANFIC. You have ripped my heart to bits and taped it back together. This is—pardon the cursing—so damn BEAUTIFUL to me...Adjectives are failing me here. Maybe I'm overdramatic, but this seriously affected me.
This was well-written, rather believable; everyone seemed in-character, too. And the story was enthralling. I just started it a few hours ago, and seriously, I may have been going into withdrawal from not reading it. I needed to know what would happen. Usually, I don't get that feeling from fanfiction.
AND IT WAS FREAKIN' BEAUTIFUL.
EVERYTHING WAS BEAUTIFUL.
Mel, I thank you so much for writing this and posting it. That's...All right, English isn't working for me right now. But thank you. You've got talent, I can convey that much.
Keep writing. Please.
I'm going to reread this.
| Regina lunaris chapter 15 . 1/27
Wahhhhh! It was sooo good! I was so scared that Roy was going to actually kill him! OMG! What a rush! I really loved it! Great Job! Nothing like I thought it would be at first but it was better than I could have imagine it! Defiantly a favorite!
| CHiKa-RoXy chapter 15 . 1/24
I. am now litrally speechless you thief. My heart has been stolen away by this story and now it won't giv it back, dang it! Good night :)
| CHiKa-RoXy chapter 14 . 1/24
YOU, MY FRIEND, HAVE BEEN TWISTING MY HEART AROUND FOR SO LONG AND OMG this just as gut-wrenching as being on an extreme roller coaster ride... maybe even worse, or better depending on how you look at it. You really do know how to play with us reader's emotions. I almost gave up on Ed myself and I just didn't wanna go on if it turned out that Ed really HAD to die.
Something about this story made me hang on, though. Ah, how I love these kind of clever stories that play with your feelings. It's like you're free-falling, trusting the author to not betray that trust and then being jarringly pulled back from that void. Seriously man, this is psychologically painful yet enjoyable to read. Such strange juxtaposition (if I'm even using that word right)
But, like, seriously I just couldn't be more emotional right now if you killed a kitten in front of me, I swear.
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 15 . 1/20
I have wanted to kill you so many times through the course of this story. But I'm glad I didn't, because otherwise I never would have had any peace from the suspense.
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 7 . 1/20
Oh, Ed remembering 'colonel b******d was priceless. I was waiting for such a breakthrough, but I'm really confused about how big Edward is as a Chimera.
| The Awesome March Hare chapter 15 . 1/18
This was so awesome! I loved it to death desu.
| Kit chapter 13 . 12/23/2013
I think you did a great job with the story. I like how you worded all of it. You explain things so clearly, I could see everything playing out in my mind. You should try writing you own books, they would be great. Your ability to put an idea that is in your mind into words is amazing.
| Dragon Courage chapter 15 . 12/20/2013
| Dersite chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
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| Dersite chapter 9 . 12/15/2013
...Oh fucking shit this fic is tearing me apart
| The Hero of Time 1998 chapter 15 . 12/14/2013
I honestly don't know whether to hug you for making such a sad, but heartwarming story or reprimand you for making me panic and cry so many times.
I LOVED IT.