Reviews for Number Twenty Eight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It put a whole new meaning to "dog of the military " xD but the ending was good and over all an awesome fic :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uwaah, great story.. It totally feels like I still have a long way to go. The details are superb, so realistic:-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fucking cried throughout the whole damn thing! Ay ay ay, this was too intense. Tears were just leaking from my eyes like water from a broken faucet. Absolutely brilliant. Sometimes its hard to catch the human element beyond the horror of the main issue. People neglect the moral and emotional implications in favor of exclusive imagery in horror. You did not do this. You really caught every element of this. Just damn. Emphatic. Wonderful. Heart wrenching and horrifying and simple and sweet and everything in the world. Love this. |
![]() ![]() It was great ! Made me laugh a couple times... Okay many times, love this story ! Keep writing stuff- i really liked it CM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its so sad! :( Poor Edo, at least Roys got him |
![]() ![]() The 6 sisters( me, moons shadow, Insanity, Blue tears, grim spirit and Lions rage.): FUCK YOU! HOW DARE YOU MAKE ED UNINTELLIGENT HE'S A FREAKING PRODIGY HE WOULD AT LEAST ANSWER CORRECTLY BITCH! FUCK YOU BITCH, FUCK YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was crying, literally, had tears in my eyes. Not joking here! I cry easy, but this is by far the first fanfic to make me cry. I love it, so amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story a little bit ago, I think that it was one of the first fanfictions I've ever read. I'm so glad that now that I have an account, I can favorite this story so that it will be very easy to find and read! By the way, you are an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so epic! I can't believe how often I was brought to tears, and how hopeless I felt right along with Mustang! I'm glad it ended on a happy note - so glad! Thank you so much for sharing this! It is beautifully written :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe! (': |
![]() ![]() Don't take it down ever! You hear me? Ever! Or send me a copy if you do ;P |
![]() ![]() Reading the story for a second time. I just love the way you write! Enough details to make the picture complete and that it feels 'real', but not so much to make it dull. :D The story is angsty and just downright amazing, you did the characters so well! You've got to promise to never take it down, for I want to read it several more times in the upcoming years. :) Otherwise you've got to send me a copy XP |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate and love this chapter at the same time. The content is awful but so well written. |
![]() ![]() Three little words. lol! |