|Reviews for Number Twenty Eight|
| VeronicaChase chapter 15 . 1/30/2021
Oml I- need therapy after this lmao jk this mmmm was so freaking good? Like idk I hope you become an author or something cuz I’d definitely buy your books
| VeronicaChase chapter 14 . 1/30/2021
My pillow is literally soaked in tears
| VeronicaChase chapter 13 . 1/30/2021
I’m crying noooo make it stop
| VeronicaChase chapter 9 . 1/30/2021
Lmao leftover parts
| VeronicaChase chapter 7 . 1/30/2021
That entire kitchen scene made me laugh, cry, and cry while laughing
| VeronicaChase chapter 3 . 1/30/2021
That’s so effing sad
| Rain-Cloudy chapter 15 . 12/14/2020
hello I loved your fic I just started reading it and it was one of the ones I liked the most, I will wait for more stories from you crack and wink
| Rain-Cloudy chapter 1 . 12/14/2020
| ArriatheDragon chapter 14 . 11/14/2020
AUTHOR SAN! You had me really worried there for a sec! How dare you! AHH I love this though! I'm homeschooled and I only read fan fics so I asked my mum if I could do a book report on this instead of something normal and she said YES! Can you believe it?
But my GOODNESS You had me on the EDGE OF MY SEAT!... Or... bed...its 3:30... am... hehehe
I LOVE THIS AUTHOR SAN! THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT AND SAVING ME FROM HAVING TO WRITE A REALLY BORING BOOK REPORT! Instead I get to do it on Chimes!Ed Au! What fun! I am eternally greatful and love your writing, arigato! ;o
| NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 15 . 11/8/2020
Wow, I absolutely loved this!
It was very well written and every stage of Ed's transition flowed so smoothly!
And wow, especially all the events after where Ed is finally almost human were just so heartbreaking to read
It's really cool how you managed to insert little bits of dog in Ed as well - I reeaally liked that epilogue intro!
I'll be honest, I thought this was going to have a bad ending at some point and I am so relieved that it doesn't!
I loved this!
| GRR7997 chapter 12 . 10/14/2020
Yo Roy buddy I get that this shit is tough but you've made enough significant progress with Ed that I think its pretty abelist for you to be so insistent on putting Ed down if you can't fix him the rest of the way you dunderhead.
| Bookwormbybee chapter 15 . 8/26/2020
read this a few tears ago. I don't even remember how long ago but it was a while, i know that. was thinking about it recently and decided to give it a re-read.
still a fantastic story and one of the best chimera!Ed fics out there.
| akapella chapter 15 . 1/14/2020
The 2003 FMA anime was very emotional; Nina chimera absolutely killed me. And now there's this and it's astounding, really! And yeah, I cried A LOT. Loved Roy's character development!
| VioletIsInPain chapter 15 . 12/8/2019
| FrozenFlames12 chapter 15 . 11/17/2019
Naaaaaaaaaaaaa! This was amazing! Poor Ed... You are an amazing author!