Reviews for Fate's Playground
daisycb chapter 25 . 6/26
This is a beautiful story and I am very sorry that you won't be continuing it. I understand that there are times that people must move on and I thank you for the pleasure I got from reading what you have written.
rustyone chapter 25 . 5/25
This was a great story. Was it adopted? Thanks for sharing and I hope someone does continue...
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 3 . 4/29
I don't like the setup for this story. Dumbledore somehow excuses himself once again from fixing the worst things that are wrong in his world because it's just too inconvenient. Oh, I broke my nail again... I guess I can't Floo the Potters and warn them not to make Pettigrew their secret keeper, nor can I have Pettigrew arrested on charges of espionage and treason. I can't even give Sirius a trial despite the fact that I'm Chief Warlock of the Wizengamot and it's my responsibility to see that everyone gets a fair trial. The reason you haven't seen this exact plot before is that it makes no sense.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 1 . 4/29
You have to wonder what Dumbledore was thinking when he forced Harry to witness his murder at the hands of Snape. Of course, he's already witnessed murder before, but still, it seems like something traumatic that one should avoid making a boy who's still a teenager witness if at all possible. I mean, he could just have well hit Harry with Stupify rather than Petrificus Totalus and he could have avoided witnessing that bit of trauma.
Calmzone1 chapter 25 . 11/23/2015
oh, I am sorry to hear that this is up for adoption. ( I appreciate all those who attempt, but most leave a lot to be desired. One even stopped after adding 1 chapter, called it the same thing - revamped - and completely changed the direction of the story. I got bored after reading 3 chapters of the new one, whereas the original was very well done.)

You are very talented for writing peoples' characters and behaviours. The interactions and growth you have written have been wonderful. It has been such a pleasure to click the next button to see what you have come up with next. I am sorry to hear that you are not continuing with this. I would love it if you could just take it to the Hogwarts letter appearing. But, I do understand that when life becomes overwhelming with daily things, it is easy to lose interest or focus. Good luck, hope you continue writing, very glad I stumbled upon your story from someone's fave list!
McCantC chapter 6 . 11/9/2015
Awe that was adorable, I love baby Harry.
McCantC chapter 4 . 11/9/2015
Awesome story ! I love reading sticks with good Dumbledore. It's a really interesting plan Dumbledore's come up with. I never liked how Harry was left on the Dursley's doorstep in cannon , having them talk with the Dursley's before leaving Harry with them makes much mora sense to me. I wonder if it'll make a difference in how Harry is treated ?
Love2read23 chapter 15 . 8/26/2015
"How ironic,' Albus thought to himself, 'that Severus would be teaching Harry to be a Marauder.'"
What a great line.
Love2read23 chapter 24 . 8/26/2015
Adorable. I like snarky playful Harry stories and now that he's growing up we get more of that. What a happy story. Thank you.
duj chapter 25 . 4/26/2015
Sorry that your desire ran out before the story did. (I sympathise. I've had the same problem, and I'm still waiting for inspiration to re-strike me.)
duj chapter 22 . 4/26/2015
Hmm. I'm not really on board with this Harry-senses trope TBH. I think it robs the story of mystery and suspense to telegraph to the reader who's good and who's not.
duj chapter 21 . 4/26/2015
duj chapter 19 . 4/26/2015
Cute. I like that he's making the changes for Harry's sake rather than his own.
duj chapter 18 . 4/26/2015
The room is a good idea, if a bit late in coming. I suppose he's been too busy with Harry to think about school matters till now.
duj chapter 17 . 4/26/2015
Little Harry is quite the moral arbiter.
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