Reviews for The Dress
red x chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
its really good this is one of the most coolest things i have ever red...you must make a sequel...xxxx
StormRocker chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Love it
ArtemisRules chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Could you please write some more?
Charlotte chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
keep going pls that was really good!
jenna chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
eww how old r u? thats gross!
Aerrow Piper Fan chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
AWESOME
shippo piper's little sister chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
when piper was about to warn her friends she saw shippo drinking the dark ace's blood he kissed her on the cheek by thanking her to heal him up "shippo what are you doing" he asked the little fox demon dark angel vampire kit since he followed her to the condor "i'm mixing the hyptno mind control obliventxes crystals together to mind control piper to join us" she answered to him and he was thinking of it he helped piper's younger sister to help dark ace heard piper coming in to her room escaping from the dress shippo's idea is working the dark ace grabbed shippo and left without being seen before piper came back to her friends she knowtist three crystals connecting to each other she felt weird the dark ace shippo and the cyclonians came to cyclonia to honor master cyclonis shippo's best friend "any luck of the plan shippo?" she held her like a cat "i mind control piper with three crystals sorry" shippo told her "i'm so proud of you" cyclonis put her hand on her head later aerrow heard piper coming back he ran into her room but it was already too late she turns into master cyclonis aerrow grabbed her arms " who did this to you piper" he asked "shippo did this i quit the storm hawks and become a talont" she answered with an evil look she left and never came back the storm hawks turned around and follow piper but she is too fast and vanished into cyclonia cyclonis was surprised piper is joining the dark side " you arwe quitting the storm hawks and share the same faith as shippo did" she asked "yes" piper nodded
shippo piper's little sister chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
shippo jumped on dark ace's sholder "shippo what are you doing" he grabbed her face gentlly "hold still your tongue is bleeding" shippo and dark ace eye contact to each other she put her lips in his mouth just like what he did to her sister piper piper was shocked she saw shippo and dark ace protecting each other she ran in front of them when they are leaving with the crystals shippo stole "dark ace i decided to quit the storm hawks and become a talont" shippo and dark ace looked at each other dark ace put his two hands on her arms "if you join us you will never will be the storm hawks" he told her and he hyptnotised her with the mind control crystal which he stole it piper begin to feel strange with weird looking eyes too look like master cyclonis and dark ace like shippo did aerrow is worrying about piper and shippo he saw them taking off the cyclonians followed shippo and headed to cyclonia to see master cyclonis cyclonis seen piper betraying the storm hawks and decided to join her sister "shippo what is piper doing here" she asked the little fox demon dark angel vampire "i mind controled her" cyclonis is proud of her
shippo piper's little sister chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
"dark ace wait i need to tell you something" piper jumped infront of him and shippo "what is it" shippo said to her sister "i decided to join you" "really are you sure if you are joining me you have to obbey to master cyclonis" dark ace grabbed her hand and shoulder piper quits the storm hawks and became a cyclonain with her sister shippo aerrow was getting the two girls he saw the dark ace helding them "let them go dark ace" he cried shippo tossed her chain sword at aerrow's arms and legs the talons saw shippo injuring aerrow finn raddar junko and stork with kohaku's chain sword piper was shocked she saw her own sister hurting the storm hawks she tried to pin her down the dark ace grabbed and hyptnotise her to have stranger behavior "shippo we have to leave you'll kill those boys later" dark ace picked up and held her like a dog piper shippo and dark ace left and came back to cyclonia and have all to crystals in crates master cyclonis knowtist piper betrayed the storm hawks and joined shippo which she wants her sister back "dark ace what is piper doing here with shippo" she asked " i mind control her and i know bringing shippo is a bad thing" he answered "i'm proud of you dark ace"
shippo piper's little sister chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
when piper and dark ace were making out piper saw shippo next to dark ace " piper if you quit the storm hawks join me and share the same fathe as shippo did" dark ace told as he held and pet shippo like his own sister "if i join you will you never get me shippo apart" the dark ace nodded yes as piper took her dress off she and shippo heading back to the condor aerrow finn raddar junko and stork saw shippo and piper heading home " shippo piper we missed you two so much" piper and shippo are acting strange when they got here the dark ace mind control the storm hawk girls both of them have red and purple eyes "aerrow i haven't seen you for a while" shippo climbed in aerrow's arms until aerrow felt a crystal in shippo's pocket piper grabbed his rist to stop "don't ever touch my baby sister againthe storm hawks are heading to cyclonia to destroy master cyclonis where the dark ace inbedded the mind control crystal in piper and shippo"s pockets " dark ace did you put the mind control crystal in shippo and piper's pockets if you did good" master cyclonis asked him " yes i did at the fashion show dress room and the dresses ravess made i add mind control in two dresses" he answered to her piper and shippo went to cyclonia without getting caught master cyclonis saw piper coming "you're joining me piper" "yes" "brilighent"
Tess chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I thought that it was a great story! There are a few little misses here and there but all in all, it was a wonderful story. I reviw books as a side job and I would give this a 5 on my rating scale. That's a, "I would definately read this again!" Good job!
Halo Kyuubi Girl chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
nice!-
o.O Xiaonikki O.o chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
o UPDAE UPDATE UPDATE OR SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL !

NIKKI X
Cinderpool-Beam Me Up Sokka chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
I'm going to slap the dark ace right now.
DevilsAngelSaphire chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
wow... um... not my type of pairing... but I loved it anyway. It's a good story. keep up the writing.
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