Reviews for Concrete Setsuna
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Aww poor setsuna :( that's so sad but nice job on the fic plz continue!
OfSunsetsandCarcrashes chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Awww, how sad. The song fits with this fanfic. That was quite a cliffhanger, though. Has Setsuna's father found her? Is he going to carry out the deed that he failed to complete before? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You're doing a great job with this story so far. :)
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
great start! you should continue.
CeLlTab chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
OH! this was very well written and I await the next chappy! XD hope you update son~

KonoSetsuna chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
Wow. Poor Setsuna. Child abuse always makes me uncomfortable.
Raineel chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
hey is really nice i like it a lot please do continue ?
Minh H Nguyen chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Good work!But I wonder why you used 's' in 'fathers'.Is Setsuna had more than one?Anyway...UPDATE SOON! _
Reusch17 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I like where this is heading. Please continue it! Great job. )
Kohaku Zelpher chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Great chapter I hope you keep it up.
ToumaSan chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Wait you mean her father has white feathers too? Great start looking forward to the next chap.
KuroShiroYamiHikari chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
this is a pretty good start. thanks!