Reviews for THE FINAL LEGACY: THE BATTLE OF THE ELEMENTS
GamerGirl597 chapter 7 . 4/26/2015
Love this story so far, but ITS 2015! Where's the next chapter!?
shadowcharizard57 chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Nice ending
Meema chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I dunno... I really ike your story so far but I don't think may realt lags that much. She only did that in the beginning and pretty soon she was as fast as ifnpt faster than the others. She and ash raced a few times in the anime and usually who ever won, won by a few seconds. But anyway nice story :)
dewdrop6 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
i like it but how can you fold a bicycle.
bloom chapter 7 . 12/29/2009
one awesomeness.

i cant wait you better updat,darnit!i gotta admit,at first i thought you were taking a page from pokemon XD,but now...i dont really know?hope may and ash get together soon,SO UPDATE!NOW!

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome aw*hypervintalates and goes into unconsiousness*

random person:such big words*_*
beoderro chapter 7 . 10/16/2008
Intresting...very. Anyway, I can't wait next chapter
beoderro chapter 4 . 10/16/2008
Nice one.
beoderro chapter 3 . 10/16/2008
Nice chapter. There was few mistakes but so what. )
beoderro chapter 2 . 10/16/2008
Again..great chapter. Is Brendan good or bad guy..hmm...intresting..
beoderro chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Nice chapter! Their bikes was like mini bikes? o.O
Sweet ANGEL 1234 chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
What is taking u so long to update a chap its been weeks since u updated pls hurry up hmm I think that u have writer block don't u. usually for late updates that's what happens well good luck writing the next chappie :)
readeradv chapter 7 . 6/16/2008
Wicked...

Update soon, or death will greet you with nasty big pointy teeth...
readeradv chapter 5 . 6/16/2008
I love explosions...
XAOTL Omega chapter 7 . 4/9/2008
Wellz...

Hm, too bad that Ash isn't Ebil anymore :(

Ebil Ash was kewl.

And Ebil Pikachu wasn't bad either.
LuciferIX chapter 7 . 4/8/2008
So the Black Pikachu was only temporary, darn. Oh well, he'll be back.

The only problem that I had with this chapter is that Ash seemed to get the knowledge out of nowhere. I can guess that he gained some of it from the orb but I think it might have been better to keep him from knowing everything just yet, at least when he's in his normal state. Thats just my opinion at least.

Interesting attacks, these Forbidden Moves will prove to be something to watch. Nice chapter, keep the updates coming!
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