|Reviews for Relation or relationship|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/22
There are several mistakes in this first chapter, needs to be edited!
| booklova44 chapter 35 . 11/1/2017
HI u love your story and I hope you continue it. Ps please make edward begging for bella back! In every story its bella begging edward. Please give her some back bone. Let him chase her for once. I think she earned it.
| sue1zide chapter 35 . 8/17/2017
I enjoyed this very much.
| Mell C chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
It's a bit difficult to follow your writing. I highly recommend finding someone to help you edit and work a bit on language and grammar. There are some beautiful sentences and descriptions in your story. But it's a tad too messy for me to read.
| Helen Keller chapter 20 . 5/9/2017
this is offensive. please take it down. bleuuurggghhhhhhh
| ReadToLove chapter 1 . 5/9/2017
If you want to attract more readers, beta-ing is a must!
Also, what is wrong with you... Your summary has so many mistakes... What does "Bella go to Forks" even mean?! Everything is so disjointed and just plain weird.
| Vamps09 chapter 34 . 3/23/2017
Love love love this story! Thanks for writing!
| Vamps09 chapter 29 . 3/23/2017
All I can say is wow! Pretty harsh!
| Vamps09 chapter 26 . 3/23/2017
Dang that was a really hot dream!
| Vamps09 chapter 16 . 3/23/2017
Loving this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
I appreciate your time in writing. And I see this story has many reviews.
The language and syntax in this story are. . . Very awkward. Choppy and disjointed. The only way I could understand/accept that the language is so odd is if English is not your first language. "Dear my readers"?
And there the subject/verb tenses in the summary don't match.
I share this all to say that it's all too distracting for me to read. Sorry.
| dfa chapter 34 . 12/13/2016
i did not just read all that shit to have it come to this...!
after all that angst bella chases Edward down? he rejects her again and bam their together? fuck that...FUCK THAT
you should throw chapter 34 OUT! its total bullshit
| jk chapter 33 . 12/13/2016
I'm kinda thinking that Edward can go fuck himself
| jk chapter 31 . 12/13/2016
I don't think bella would be rejecting some hot guy for a man that just fucked her off like that...I think she would fuck jake like she means it just to spite Edward...and Edwards nasty anyway...mr Tanya and I would make love for hours before bella...ummm really? how does one "make love" without love?
| jk chapter 14 . 12/13/2016
he just fucked Tanya earlier that day...and now hes all oh bella oh bella? how romantic...hey bella will you suck my dick? I know it still tastes like tanyas spit but what do you say?
oh Edward..."thank you for letting me know this part of you"
I fucking hate this story