Reviews for Blame the Butterflies
icecatfire chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
THAT was the MOST adorable thing EVER! *can't stop giggling* chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
that was funny great job gotta love lily and james


live well smile lots and update often
Masen chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
First half of fic: "Damn butterflies..."

Last part of fic: "Aww! I love those damn butterflies!"

Yeah... anyway, thoroughly enjoyed!
harleydayenara chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
That was just soo cute! I will so 'blame the butterflys' if i ever get them. :)
KlainePotter chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
isthatacorner chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Aww! favorited! I love him. he's just so...adorkable. even if he is supposed to be all cool. he's not. nope.
lalas chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
damn butterflies. i liked it thanks for the read x
katherinegrace79 chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
This was wonderful. I loved it very much. Well done.

XfallenstarO chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
pensiveaddict chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Hilarious story! Loved those Butterflies! :) (not when I am having them in my tummy)! :) For once, James is afraid that the 7th year is his last chance...That was nice! Most people tend to make him too-over-confident! :) And, I loved the ending! Keep Going!
Danni Evans chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
An enjoyable little line ever was "Crap indeed" (Remus). Cute story!
Fallen Bridge chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Light Up The Sky chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I must say it tis impectably rude to say such things and yet not offer any advice to whom you are flaming. Perhaps you don't know a great oneshot if it bit you in the ass? Hm, perhaps.

Fantastic story darling:)
leaving now chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
It has it's goods and it's bads. The characters were exceedingly immature, and I thought they might be twelve. Remus teasing people? What the fuck! Maybe have him say things rather impatiencely?

like so

"Remus sighed, "Alas, not again, he's thinking about Lily again. He just won't respond right well..."

Remus was also too dumb when he pointed out the point about bugs, maybe:

"Butterflies? You mean the saying the butterflies in the stomach?" Remus inquired, giving James a regardingly concerned look.

I only read about half of it, but it was enough.

Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
Loved it! It was abslutely sweet and funny! I loved it! :]
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