Reviews for A Happier Place
Skywroe chapter 1 . 3/31
But...but...but? Whaaaaat? It's not finished though.
WhovianSherlockianandMerlinian chapter 1 . 3/5
I would most definitely like this to become a mutichapter fic
Jasmine Taylor chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
You need to be a more considerate writer and give a proper warning for rape.
Shay Baron chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
So, Harry stayed with his rapist because Dumbledore killed a couple of people? That's a ridiculous reason to stay; how many people has Voldemort killed (including Harry own parents)? How many has he already raped? He is no better than Dumbledore and for Harry to stay because of that is completely unrealistic.

Voldemort is incapable of love because if he actually cared about Harry he would have given him the choice of having a child or not, that was no one's decision to make but Harry's; Voldemort basically turned him into a broodmare and Harry accepted it. That's pathetic.

As a writer you need a gripe on reality; a rape victim doesn't fall in love with their rapist and true love isn't found with them. What is Harry going to tell Voldemort's spawn about how the met and it was born? That daddy kidnapped him, held him down and then raped him and maybe when they (the child) grows up they'll find someone who will do the same to them and they'll live happily-ever-after.

Even if you had tried the pathetic trope of Stockholm Syndrome it wouldn't have changed the fact that Voldemort raped Harry and Harry wouldn't have been 'happy' with him. Harry should have killed the abomination before it was born and let Voldemort know that the same fate will happen to any more of the horror he forces on him, and no I don't care how callous that sounds. Children gain traits of their parents, the world does not need more people incapable of behaving like a human.

How can you expect people to take this seriously if it isn't written believably. Yes, I can see Voldemort kidnapping Harry and yes, I can see him being selfish enough to rape Harry for his own gains but I can't for one second see Harry accepting being willing whore to his parents murderer, and in this story that is literally all he is.
Sweetmouse chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
One part of me is like WTF did I just read and the other part wants more.
The Lazy Princess chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Wow ... does it have a sequel ... such a cute story ...
Rika100 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Sad and sweet in a weird way, nice fic though. _
ruth hammond chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
know it has been some time since you mentioned the extra chapters to this, hope it comes soon...after the other stories are finished...

thanks for the writing...
Mirabitur chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
i like this. i think you should write about how the baby is raised and if harry falls for voldie...
Veiled Sapphire chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Extending this into a multi chapter fic would be awesomeful to the extremes of the earth. You has a fan now. Hehe.

-VS
GeminiCancer chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I think this would make an excellent multi-chapter story.
reeby10 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
I like it :D and I think it would be quite interesting as a multi-chapter fic ;D
WinterRepublic chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I loved it.

In the... third (?) paragraph though, your spacing between the words got lost. I think also in the..last (?) on too. Probably got dropped in the upload transfer. :3
BloodiedFangs chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
wow its rather familiar to the story i'm working on at the minute, although you've managed to do it all in one chapter, i'm terrible with one shots so, Well done :) lol

as for as spelling, its all good to me, only thing out of place was a part near the top quarter that read

'warning and heflipped hisslender body around'

apart from that you've done a good job!
amy hobbes chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
im reading almost all of your stuff right now, in order...

of a sort...

anyway, good job. and please, try to finish/continue them!
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