Reviews for Bated
SerialAuthor chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
This definitely has to be one of my most favorite oneshots. It's so smiple, and romantic, and it's just. . . Way too hard to explain. It's what a good story should be.
starkmaddness chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
wb
Disintegrating Vortex chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Beautiful! Truly beautiful... my absolute favorite pairing in terms of sexy wrongness but yet SO RIGHT! Anyway, Seimei pretty much admits it in the manga, so... *canon!*
PerpetualxLight chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
THIS IS SOO GREAT! You really captured Seimei's personality perfectly! I love this couple and I love this story!
SerenityFrogLuvr3 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
wow, this is amazing, exactly how i alwauys imagined seimei's mind to work. I always found his love for ritsuka to be rather possessive, and you capture that pefectly : )
Tyan chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Awesome.
J Plash chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Gah, you have Seimei down something insane. This is just perfect. Just the right balance of complete sociopath and...well, more sociopath :P The composition's right though. It all fits, it all makes sense, it all feels accurate. Lots and lots of really great lines...the description of night, Ritsuka growing in his likeness, that gorgeous last line, and this: "We are a tiny island, you and I, in the vast ocean of darkness that is the night. I am pleased by this." That line is awesome. It's like Seimei in 2 sentences.

This is a seriously, seriously good fic. The quality of the writing itself is excellent too. Quality.

J
Zam98 chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Ah... this reminds me of just how much I love Seimei... you did an amazing job! Mainly I have trouble reading fan-fiction in first-person, because it's hard to get the character's way of thinking quite right. This however, was done perfectly. Seimei is such a sick, twisted little boy... and of course, completely lovely. Gorgeous work, I loved it!

xoxox

~Ruu
Cliscia chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
-And this is why I love this pairing

so much.

Seimei is so twisted, but he still keeps that

suave nature of his.

Even in a situation like this.

Oho, you're so dirty, Seimei~

You have an interesting writing style.

I'd like to see more of it, and this pairing.
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
THAT WAS DEEP
CityOfSpilledInk chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
the way you wrote this is beautiful and poetic, absolutely perfect.
CherryApricot chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Okay, you are a liar, there is no way this is your first fic, it's too good! AHa! I know what you are! A smart liar! Oh the worst...Oh, well I loved it, keep on writing!
aviana656 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
this is one awesome story! It was like I could feel what semei must have felt and now I can kind of understand semei's thinking better. I thought that he just wanted to test Ritsuka, but he really wanted to protect him.
True Blue Dreams chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
It is a very good story, the writing is very appealing and makes you want to read more. It all flows very well and it is good that in this story it doesn't jump around making you wonder what is going on. Excellent story, it is now one of the very best, if not the best, stories I've ever read. Great job on it. w
DeathNoteMaker chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
AWESOME! I LOVED IT! Now I am in pervert mode for the day! Thank you! XD
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