|Reviews for The Upside of Invisibility|
| Teddy R. Lupin chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
I can help you with the British if you'd like.
| BalletDancer14 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
This is a very good story! Have you thought of making it into a
longer story maybe? If you added some more plot, I think it
would be very good. Sorry to say, I really don't know anything
about British slang, other than what Rowling says. I know they
say "bloody" alot. :) Also, though, a good tip I think when writing
British diolouge is to make sure it doesn't sound so formal. Many
people believe that British people talk all fancy, but they really don't
always. I hope that helps, and keep writing "Remus the Romantic"! :)
| NeverEndingFairyTales chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
There are perks to being invisible
| PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
By design I have to naturally hate this story because it's Lily/Remus and I love James/Lily. But, if I weren't an avid Lily/James shipper I would love this. I DO love this, I just don't like the pairing. Pairings aside, the simplicity and empathy of this short oneshot makes the reader muse over the relationship that both Lily and James have and the Marauders. It also makes me think over how although Peter was overlooked, Remus was also overlooked too.
Sorry for the 'I hate this' messages at the beginning - I just had to explain, so I don't feel guilty when I go to sleep. :-)
| ignorant enlightenment chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Aw, cute story. Its kinda sad that Remus' friends don't even notice hes gone! D poor Remus.
Still nice story short and sweet!
from ignorant enlightenment
| Mini-Chobi chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
Oh... perks indeed.
Props to Remus and Lily! MAN those two multitask well! :P
| hippolina97 chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
I liked this a lot, it made me consider the marauder's relationship more deeply. If Lily wasnt absolutely perfect for james, I always said that Lily/Remus would be a good pair.