Hey! You seem to have some formatting issues on thisif you ever want to fix it i think it would do the story ablot of good!

Ton histoire est super, je sais que ça fait très longtemps que tu l'as finis mais une amie me l'a conseillé il n'y a pas longtemps et j'adore ce que tu as fait

I really like your style. Too bad that you might have reached to the end of any more Snarry projects because the Severus Snape you created are very absolutely lovable(though very controversial at the very least). You have very good taste of people it seems. I am a Trekkie as well but am not quite into the series after (including) Enterprise…. Any thoughts on the Mandalorian? That’s also an interesting culture _

oh lord .. I just remembered that this fic was written in the 2000's ..
no offense, spiky hair is not it any more

ok Rivers can die .. yub Electric chair

Ok some thing I did notice that shows Sev and Harry’s relationship developing is when Harry thinks about snape, instead of using his surname(snape) he is now calling him Severus. It could’ve happened in the previous chapters and I’m barley realizing it but I think it’s still noce

Ok, it’s been years and this probably wouldn’t matter but I’ll still write this here
1. How could an inexperienced Harry be so good with pleasuring Snape?
2. You thought it prudent to show the rough encounter of Rivers and Snape, but the LONG AWAITED encounter of Harry and Snape did not even include a legit penetration scene! That was so unsatisfactory.

Owww this was a lovely story! Great Ending

Yes! They won... I was really sacre that one of them may end up dead... Good I was wrong lol

Nooo please don't let Harry be dead!

I really hope their plan work, I'm can't keep out of my mind the story of Apollo

Yes! Remus kick out rivers too!

I hope none of them do anything stupid

I'm loving their time together

Finally!

Hahaha is he really seducing Severus?! I hope Sev fall for the little trick