|Reviews for Prime, I shrunk the Officers!|
| ALoveForOrcas chapter 23 . 8/13/2013
This was a very great story, i loved it! So many cute moments and frantic ones. I loved the story. Love sparkling prowl, and how protective Sunstreaker was other things to but i really like the story great job :D
(suck at reviews but oh well :)
| Fangthehedgewolf chapter 23 . 8/13/2013
Aw. Nice ending! Poor Megatron, getting kissed to death.
| Fangthehedgewolf chapter 12 . 8/12/2013
Oh, my stomach hurts!
| Fangthehedgewolf chapter 8 . 8/12/2013
I can't stop laughing!
| Silverpelt chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Cute! I might have my sis laughing about Sunstreaker. I told her and she is still laughing.
| Infinitechange chapter 23 . 4/19/2013
Awww, cute story.
| Ironhide's Girl 103 chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
Optimus worried that Balster wil not returen. Oh the look on his faceplate , I can see it.
| Burnbee chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
| Marry Jane24 chapter 23 . 7/10/2012
| electro moonlight chapter 23 . 6/4/2012
a beautiful ending to a beautiful fic
| electro moonlight chapter 19 . 6/4/2012
aww poor lonely gears
| electro moonlight chapter 8 . 6/3/2012
is there a fic about elita one making their audials bleed it just sound like it by the way you refer to it
| Zea T chapter 23 . 10/31/2011
I very much enjoyed this story. I was delighted to find that it was complete, and was enthralled by the story you wove from beginning to end. I particularly liked the way you rendered the 'victims' as true sparklings - not just as the mechs-in-sparkling-form that I've seen in other fiction, but as small and realistic characters in their own right while remaining true to their canonical characters at the same time. It was fun to watch the little ones grow up, and to see how their relationships with their significant others evolved and were reflected in their interactions. I was also fascinated by the character arc you took Jazz and Prowl on, and really did feel for Jazz in these last two chapters. No matter what choice he made, he was losing someone he loved, and I could see his agony. It's a testament to how well you evolved Prowl's character from the wide-eyed sparkling of the first chapter that his decision was convincing and touching.
This was a good, entertaining read - with a nice balance of plot and character-driven elements. I'm glad I found it, and thanks for sharing!
| Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 23 . 10/7/2011
aaw! so nice, am sad that this is over, but the ending is very fitting, and Prowls "slips" are hilaruous to think of. very nice story
| Prowls-little-hetalian chapter 22 . 10/7/2011
aaw! that was...wow, that was...Prowl really cares for Jazz alot doesnt he?