Reviews for An Everlasting Friendship, Shattered
ElsaElphieGinny chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
That is just... you know what, this is the third time I'm rereading all your stories, and I'd forgotten how good you are! This is so, so sad... gosh, I hate Sirius in this, yet I never normally do...
hello this is me speaking chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
I would like to give a standing ovation to you. This is beautiful in a horrifying way. Also welcome to the very short list of fanfictions that have made me cry (full on tears), there are only 3 fanfictions that have made that list. Really though this is… wow, I can't even think of anything to say. Normally I would give some constructive criticism but my hands are still shaking and I don't think I can cope with reading that again. Sorry.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Oh my god that was so good, but so sad. If it had happened in the book, this would be exactly it. This was so beautiful, thank you for gifting us fanfictioners with this.

When I can log into here I'll favourite you and this story.
insanitylivesinme chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
I'm crying :(
Beautifully written, heart wrenching
Capta1nAmanda chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Well I want planning on crying today but I couldn't help myself. Excellent writing. You captured the personalities really well. Awesome story!
marietta chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Excellent work! You know, you have it pegged exactly perfectly. No one would have mourned Severus' death. They would have only been concerned for Remus, once the Ministry found out he'd killed someone in his werewolf form. Sirius would have cried and moaned that he just "wasn't thinking" and that he didn't mean anything by it, he just wanted to scare Snape.
patronusmagic chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
This was totally heartbreaking.
bwert chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I was in the middle of a hockey rink reading this, and I could barely hold in my tears. Well done. *applause*

Fayari chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Well, I guess I'm pretty happy that Sirius got what he deserved. I'd like to see a next chapter for this story, about the effect of SNAPE's death, this time. Imagine Lily's reaction when he hears that Sirius Black, one of the Gryffindor Golden Boys, killed her best friend. Bet she won't be so black and white about the whole Gryffindor-Slytherin thing, eh?
ProlifeJesusFreakWriterGal chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Oh gosh. I am literally almost in tears now. I hate Moony dying, and Sirius going to Azkaban is too dang upsetting. I really think Sirius didn't think at all and actef on total impulse.
a-word-nerd chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
This broke my heart. No joke. Really makes you think about what friendship means to a person...
dot chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
it was really sad i started crying after i read it i am not one to cry even if i am a girl and look weak i make boys older and bigger than me cry :) im proud of my self :)
dot chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
good story

it was really sad at the end

i was crying :'(
Ferretess xxx chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
so... I think you should continue this. Write about how James and Peter became best friends, and Peter didn't betray James and Lily... :)

I can't believe how sad this is, though it's really good. You almost had me crying, and I do not cry easily. That's a good thing, though.
GalitMirav chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
That was officially the saddest story I've ever read. Wow. I am so glad that didn't happen.

I agree with theone reviewer, the dialog wasn't the best. But you have certainly improved over time. Keep up the good work.
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