Reviews for History
Bg chapter 4 . 2/13/2008
hey i like the direction and telling of your story though the chapters are kinda short. i was woundering though how far you've read or seen of the Bleach Manga and/or Anime, cause if you've seen who Grimmjow is maybe you don't know he's a Vastro Lord, 2 maybe 3 levels above Menos Grande and he's an Arrancar which makes him hundreds of times more powerful in it's own right. and Ichigo takes him on easy. and just in case you weren't aware by the time Ichigo gains his Bankai, heck when he releases his Zanpakuto a Menos Grande would be nothing in comparison Ichigo would Getsuga Tenshou his ass back to Heuco Mundo with ease. sorry if i sound like a dick, but i like your story and couldn't help but point out a few things
Chigatana chapter 7 . 2/13/2008
hmm interesting fic so far...like the way its set up and the way its written(typed?)...the ichiruki is good so far but could use a little more i think but w/e...zaraki is way funny, gota love the battle ready maniac...well till next update...
love-sick-reaper chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Hmm...I can't deny that its an intellectual plot. Unfortunately I can't see myself reading it all. It's the kind of plot I'd love to see in a movie. But its good stuff. No doubt I'll read it when I've got the time and I'm sure by the time I'm done with it, I'll be emailing you non-stop praise. Don't disappoint with the following chapters.
Kokiiru-kun chapter 7 . 2/11/2008
This is interesting... For a second I thought the monster looked like Ichigo's inner hollow but it's different.
Zetnnik chapter 7 . 2/11/2008
Loved the chapter. Ichigo's rant and opinion about the captains is too funny! ...and then the flirting with Rukia... ::sigh:: although I'm not really fond of Ichigo pairing with anyone...

Again, Zaraki... what can you say about Zaraki? Love him!

Hope you update soon. Loving your story BTW, not sure if I've mentioned that before. :o)
Tech87655255258 chapter 7 . 2/11/2008
This is an amazing fic...

Thx for a great read.

Keep it up.
akirk85029 chapter 7 . 2/10/2008
I bet Kurotsuchi will be thrilled when Ichigo and Kenpachi start destroying his division!:) Good chapter, can't wait till the next one!:)
colourpearl chapter 4 . 2/8/2008
Wow, this is really great!

But, can you clear something up for me? Are Ichigo and Rukia together in this or not?
m-chan12311994 chapter 6 . 2/8/2008
Urahara's writing was totally him. cant wait to find out more about the mystery!
Zetnnik chapter 6 . 2/7/2008
Wow! Your portrayal of the characters are so dead on, IMO.

How you portrayed Urahara even in just writing/record is so him - that arrogance and cockiness... "...screw them. I'm the captain and I do what I want." Priceless!

And then there's Rukia's reactions to his writing or record keeping! He'd better watch out! Hah! Just so funny!

Can't wait for the next chapter... getting close to finding out what it is exactly... I hope.
Zetnnik chapter 5 . 2/7/2008
Loved the IchiRukia moments...

I noticed the fact that Rukia only took exceptions to the "dramatic" part and not to the "idiot". Hm...

Rukia has the hots for Ichigo! Hehehe... and who could blame her!

Nice chapter.
Zetnnik chapter 4 . 2/7/2008
HAHAHA! Funny! That is SO Rukia - violent woman! :o)

This interval is so Bleach-y - could be an actual scene in an ep or in the manga... Well done!
cola1012003 chapter 6 . 2/7/2008
i'm really enjoying this story,it is very original, keep up the good work!
akirk85029 chapter 6 . 2/7/2008
I would like to see Rukia give Kisuke that kick!:) Funny:) Can't wait to see what's in the book!:)
m-chan12311994 chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
you're right about the action stuff...i guess that i usually read more adventure/action stories than mysteries..loved the fluff at the end and the fast update! this just keeps getting more and more interesting...but i think urahara was a lil OOC because he usually would be cracking jokes or saying random stuff at the end.
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