Reviews for Ten Little Things
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 24 . 1/14
I like how Victoire is jealous of Dominique speaking French with a perfect accent and Dominique is jealous of Victoire speaking English with a French accent when she wants to.
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 23 . 1/14
An interesting look at Hermione. I liked the bit about her wanting siblings.
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 22 . 1/14
So sad, although funny at parts
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 21 . 1/14
Very good, as always
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 20 . 1/13
This may be my favorite capter, because Sirius is my favorite character and you wrote him well
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 19 . 1/13
Number 10 was my favorite, I think
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 18 . 1/13
Hmm, this was interesting (I loved the unicorn bit. And the penguins... how random)
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 17 . 1/13
Aww, very sweet, especially number 10

And we finally know who James' mysterious redhead is...J
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 16 . 1/13
Good chapter. Number 10 made me cry.

However as he was in Azkaban at the time, I don't think Lucius ad much control over whether Draco joined the Death Eaters or not
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 15 . 1/13
This was good, but I don't think number 5 portrays it as it was in the books. I think Draco was trying to protect both his parents when he took on the mission and in book 7 Lucius was as panicked about Draco as Narcissa was
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 14 . 1/13
Good chapter as always. Though I don't think Albus and James actually have dark red hair...

I like number 10
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 13 . 1/13
Very good. Made me tear up.

One small ting though. I believe you don't choose classes until third year
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 12 . 1/13
Very good. Number one was sad. It makes sense that his name would be harder for the other's to say than Harry's kids, even though they're named after the dead too, after all Lly and James died when Harry was a bay, and Albus was always Dumbledore, but Fred was just Fred
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 11 . 1/13
Interesting littlepiece. Though in 38 you said Lorc when I believe you meant Lysander gets in a weird mood.

Also is the end of number 4 supposed to say can't or is can correct?
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 10 . 1/13
This one made me cry. (Especially the end of number 6)

At fist I was confused as to why she would be relieved Percy was gone, then I read the last line.

All in all, very powerful.
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