Reviews for The Ticking Clock
lemon-and-chai2B chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Sad! -runs off to read the sequal-
a1y-puff chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
to reviewer #4 and ?

if you're just here to flame, well.. I'll use your flame to burn my homeworks ;p

and if you guys hates fanfic so much, why bother reading at all?

Just so you know, I'll keep writing coz there are people who LOVES my works. you can flame all you want, actually in my profil page it'll look good coz I get many reviews (tho some of them flame) at least you guys being nice enough to read and leave your kind critics in anonymous reviews. thank you very much XD

love, a1y-puff.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Beautiful! Please make a sequel)

Your 4th reviewer needs to use her/his imagination more and should write HER/HIS OWN super IN CHARACTER story.
SkySurf chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Woah! Tezuka is not OOC in this story, so don't worry! ;)

I love the part where you wrote, "Tennis was not his everything. Fuji was." -That was so touching!

Maybe you can consider write a short sequel? XD
speadee chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
You almost drove me to tears. Good job on their relationship! However, I think Fuji would understand Captain Tezuka's need for tennis and tournament, and wouldn't get into such a big fight over it.
everlastingdeath chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
Aww...Fuji was not home yet.

This is kewl
Morelen chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Does it sound weird if I say this is beautiful?

Anyway, awesome story! (It would be nice to have a sequel or an omake though *nudge nudge wink wink* [I'm a sucker for happy endings])
maldita08 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
Eh. but mal-chan loves fluff. Tezuka should search for him...pwetty please?

like using theme 7 or theme 21...
taraentulA chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
You've got to make a sequel!
LunaLocket chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
u should totally write a sequel for up the good work.
Soring Angel P.O.T chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
So SAD pore Tezzi, and Fujiko. Tezuka better get a very good way to apologize a very good one. With a lot of LOVE.

P.S. SEQUAL
Tacuma chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
omg, you wrote again! And I love it again! Poor Fuji, poor Tezuka! Will you make another chapter? Or will it end like this? *starts crying* I feel so sorry for them XD