Reviews for Unbreak
Schwan chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
That was a great story. Absolutely beautiful. Well done. You are a great author.
Little Miss Escapist chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
ahh, tsunade and sakura fic.
Anon E. Mouse chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Good story, unusual viewpoint (despite the character being totally cool) and you killed Sakura. No, that was actually a compliment, even though Sakura too is very cool. That was...so sad. So sad. *starts bawling*
Illucida chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
This was a nice piece. You wrote Tsunade very well. _
yumi-maki chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Oh wow, I'm tearing up here. This one was just heartbreaking, crushing really - I really, really mean that. I'm wiping them away now. You just - I don't know how you do it but you just capture their feelings so well. Gosh, it was just brilliant, brilliant and heartbreakingly beautiful.
Who were the Precursors chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
...Wow. That was incredibly deep. You seriously have a way with words. That's very inspiring. Great job!
Mere Anarchy chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
"Tsunade is an old woman hiding beneath smooth skin."

One of the many wonderful lines in this piece. Great job.
Momosportif chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
Oh god... this one made me cry. Wow. That was heavy! And oh so gorgeous! I've never read for this relationship before nor written for it and I'd rather not now unless plot bunnies attack me very violently because that was untouchable. I've never read a Sakura death fic either, not even from you (if my memory serves correctly).

"When she’s gone, no one will remember. You wouldn’t remember her, Tsunade thinks, unless you’d known her personally. But this is a lie—of course it’s just a lie—since Sakura’s hair is bright pink, and how many people have hair like that? Of course they’d all remember."

I'm pretty sure that if I had to choose a favorite, which would be cruel and evil, that would be my favorite line. Jeez. Your fics are so realistic, you characterize people just so but your bring the characters out of manga or anime so it seems... it's really beautiful. This line contains whatever lets you do that, it has a raw flavor... like you find details that apply to real life or something... whatever, it's amazing and so good to read even if it's angsty and makes me cry /o\

Five (hundred million) stars, babe! That was exceptional. If I could select favorite stories twice, I would in a heart beat. Possibly my favorite one I've read from you. Kudos!
Kiros Razer chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
That is awesomely written, definitely a favorite!
123456789123456789123456789123 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I loved it. Please update soon
mia chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I'm not sure how you do it. This piece was something that really made me wonder- it's that type of writing that gets down into you and takes hold of your thoughts. Your Tsunade is more realisticly portrayed than any other I've seen before, I can actually picture her heartbroken.

I've been watching your writing for a while now, I hope to see more from you. You're a very talented author, don't give up on it. ]
Capitulate chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I feel so special, my appreciation runs deep. 3

You don't write Tsunade often, but I like the way you tapped into her character. I really like how you centered the story on her and Sakura. 3 Life truly is a fragile thing, as well as a fragile subject, and though this one was a tad on the dark side, what with death being incorporated, it was undeniably pretty. Lovely job, I enjoyed this story immensely, keep posting. I still can't express how much I love your work. 3

Cheers!