Reviews for Broken Memory
Ris Fallon chapter 2 . 2/5/2008
I really like this

Kairi's just the kind to simmer until her thoughts lead her into circles, and then interrogate everyone till that leads her into another circle. She's just stubborn enough to work at it till she defied laws of nature. I love how you portrayed her, and how you used the first-person narration. Very few authors can pull it off, let alone pull it off well.