|Reviews for Year Two of Forever|
| edwardbellaandnessie99 chapter 53 . 10/9/2011
Wow all these stories are AMAZING they are most defonatley my favourites hmmm you know how you mentioned gloucester well I live in England and personally I would have chosen York but apart from that these stories are absolutely amazing I'm also reading Sin city sinners to see what the boys had to make up for last time! You write just like Stephanie Meyer it's almost creepy! I have a liking for stories with the while Cullen family in but with Bella being a vampire and when I found these I was so happy to finally find one that wasn't too lemony but still really interesting x thank you for writing these and keeping me from going mental for a week! Xx
| Hedwig Edwiges chapter 64 . 9/8/2011
That was a surprise. I really didn't see this one coming. Interesting choice for the finish. But I'm still curious about what Bella and the Cullen family would do to get away from the Volturi.
| Twiward chapter 64 . 6/10/2011
uck :(; i wanted to see what happened with Aro :( oh well :p, i really liked the story3 xxxxxxxxxxx
| crimson blush 17 chapter 64 . 3/6/2011
I don't think I've ever read a better story. Wow. This is just... wow.
| tds88 chapter 66 . 12/3/2010
This said it all. As I was getting close to the end of the story I hoped it wasn't just an anti-climatic ending where you brush off the whole Volturi problem and just say the end. That definitely would have been a truly awful ending.
I see that this ending, although it made me sad because it didn't go into the happy ending that I thought I was seeing in her "dream", it still inferred of the happy ending that could and will happen. Also it showed how much Bella grew up and was ready and understood everything about Edward's feelings and emotions toward all that has happened. It helped her become closer to everyone, even though they could not experience the same knowledge, it eased their worries because she shows that she knows how they feel and what they feel bad about and can forgive them and tell them its ok.
As stated at the end of your note, your writing and this story really evoked many strong and wonderful emotions in me. I truly enjoyed reading all three stories to the series and truly believe that it could have taken the place of Breaking Dawn because of the wonderful writing and amazing storyline.
I can't believe it's over, but am really happy I found this story. It made my day every time I sat down to read it, so thank you. I can't wait to read the companion pieces you wrote for this.
| tds88 chapter 64 . 12/3/2010
AHHHHHH I did not see that coming what so ever! I thought it was weird how nonchalantly they were all of a sudden in Volterra, but didn't think much of it. Even when Bella "fainted" I never thought it was all going to be a DREAM! As much as I want it to have been real this little twist is perfect.
Did you know this was where you were going when you wrote the first story or even the second one?
| tds88 chapter 12 . 12/1/2010
Sign of a great writer and excellent story: I want to read faster and faster to get to the end to find out what happens and at the same time I want to slow down so the story never ends.
You make me fight with myself. I'm starting to feel like Edward! ;D
| abimalech chapter 66 . 10/11/2010
excellent! Well thought out story, lemony but not pornographic and true to characters! Thank you!
| Danyy Dias chapter 66 . 10/8/2010
Fic perfect! Congratulations!
| shamito chapter 65 . 9/27/2010
love the story...everything about it speaks out how good a writer and author you are! keep up the good work!
| Nemesis of Bellin chapter 65 . 8/19/2010
it was a dream? pity! but i do love the three part of this storie! and i would like to not be a dream but you are the author so you know better...
thank you for thiw wonderfull storie!
| Nemesis of Bellin chapter 5 . 8/19/2010
i am helen from greece: i read your story the faitytale continues, first year as cullen and now i m reading year two of rorever. i dont know if i like most breaking dawn or your story... you are amazing and you have talend... i just read chapter 4 hide and seek 2 and i just love it! i would like to read it and from edward pov that would be wow!... your ideas, kidnapping, or the snowboard with emmet was amazing... even the lemons is beautiful!
i just wanna thank you for your stories!
p.s1 : congratulations to your beta readers they have done exellend job
p.s2: sorry for my english
| Pippa79 chapter 67 . 8/15/2010
oh my god, I did not see that coming but it was a brilliant twist to the stories...I haved loved reading every bit of this trilogy - albeit my husband has been grumpy for my endless hours of reading. I can understand those reviwer's who didn't like this ending but as you say the normal course of action would have been the same as all other fanfics...this was certainly different. I'm looking forward to reading the short story that goes along with this...great job
| Cottencandy26 chapter 67 . 8/12/2010
Haha Great story. Kinda upset about the Coma thing but I got over anyone who told you that you were taking the easy way out were and probaly are stupid. I don't think that was easy to do basically giving up a perfect story and life to a Coma that's not easy to do. I'm actually kinda of glad that she was in a Coma because it left an opportunity for a Sequal.I really did enjoy this story it was lick that I came across your little series well not little but you know I guess. I enjoyed every second minute hour day week of your first 3 books now I'm on to the next one. Can't wait to start reading it
I truly did enjoy this!
| Cottencandy26 chapter 45 . 8/11/2010
Aww cute chap wth Bella and Jasper no one really ever gives them a connection it's always them just kinda avoiding eachother but in this story there like the best of siblings cute chap.