Reviews for Fire
nursejoy7 chapter 6 . 6/10/2014
oh my goodness! I loved it 8.8 I want more gelphie! more gelphie plzzzzzzzzz
goldfishfordinner chapter 6 . 1/29/2014
That. Was. Amazing. Well done. Are you still doing a sequel?
guest7 chapter 6 . 11/7/2012
That was amazing! Your choice of words are great and i appreciate that you wrote so much into their individual emotions. Well done! Hope to hear more gelphie from you :)
ScOut4It chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Damn that girl has some inner monologue. I have a feeling that she's going to be surprised by what she finds when she turns around.
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 5/24/2011

I can't believe I still haven't read Wicked.

Oh well, I'm still reading!
noooooooooo chapter 6 . 11/29/2008
damn. that was a REALLY great story. :-D
ALICE IT'S RAINing chapter 6 . 8/15/2008
amazing fic

well done

heatherkinz chapter 6 . 8/13/2008
Awesome end to a brilliant story.

You captured their first time perfectly and it was also extremely hot!

Roll on the sequel
Japple Jacks chapter 6 . 8/6/2008
Holy wow. That was an amazing chapter. The perfect ending to a briliant story. Definitely one of my favorites!
Arwen17evenstar chapter 6 . 8/5/2008
great can't wait til Earth!
Greenangelwings chapter 6 . 8/5/2008
Aw. Such a sweet, sexy ending. I love it. Thanks for letting us all enjoy your wonderful writing.
DetectiveE chapter 5 . 6/30/2008
Its a beautiful story so far, especially the end of chapter five...

Your very good with details, by the way.

I love it, thats it.
Arwen17evenstar chapter 5 . 6/25/2008
you're are making me insanely wet while reading this. please don't stop. You take it excruciatingly slow which means excruciating waiting and pleasure. This is very hot and some of the gelphie i've read.
Japple Jacks chapter 5 . 6/18/2008
Oh my goodness. I loved it! This is amazing. So descriptive, so beautiful... Wow.

I loves it!

Please write more!
JadeTakashi chapter 4 . 6/17/2008
Wonderful chapter.

I like the way you play metaphor in this. It really is intriguing.

The way you examine their thoughts against their actions. I really feel these characters.

Your analysis of who these two women are is quite astonishing really. I do wish you to know this is quite among my favorite pieces so far.

I really am enjoying this.


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